A Surprising Visitor
`You had just gotten home from school, and hanging out with your friends. Soon after, you decide to clean yourself up by taking a bubble bath just like old times. The water temperature is perfect, the bubbles are perfectly spread out, so you start to get in.
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You grab a towel and put on your bunny slippers and begin making your way to the kitchen in your apartment. You grab your half way filled Boba cup from the fridge, when you hear a small knock at the door. "Who is it?" you whisper a bit too loud. The small knock becomes a small banging. You tiptoe to the peephole on the door and notice the person has their head down. You recognize the raven black hair. It was your classmate, Kageyama Tobio. You swing the door open a little too hard in excitement. "Tobio!!" you say joyfully. He bows and walks in. He collapses on the floor in exhaustion. " Hi y/n - chan." he mumbles. "What happened Tobio?" you ask curiously. Y/n -chan my sister kicked me out, may I stay the night?" he explains. "Of course" you respond. You show him your room and you make your way to the bathroom next door. About 5 mins later he asks if he could join you. You blush at the thought. You nod trying to be polite. Your face is practically a tomato at this point as you're watching him drop his clothes.
TBC~~~~~
There’s something profoundly human in your writing. You don’t just build characters, you unfold them. Their emotions, flaws, and little sparks of hope make the story feel heartbreakingly alive. It’s rare to see writing that captures both pain and beauty so effortlessly. This chapter in particular carried a quiet strength; it hit harder than I expected, and it stayed. You’ve created something that resonates on a soul level.