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Summary

Mill is a 14 year old boy who discovers himself in a odd world. A place where girls and boys hair may be naturally pink, a place where balls can be stretched, where time can go at whatever pace you want. Or can It? Is it just that time doesn't exist? What does that mean for social hierarchy?

Status
Complete
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

Where the hell am I? Who is this guy In front of Me? He's Hispanic with a monocle. He looks around the age of forty, maybe older. And he carries a walking stick. Even though he doesn't look old enough to have one. “Hey, I'm Rafael.” “Okay?” “You look young my boy how old are you?” As he asked that I lover am I? Who is this guy In front of Me? He's Hispanic with a monocle. He looks around the age of forty, maybe older. And he carries a walking stick. Even though he doesn't look old enough to have one. “Hey, I'm Rafael.” “Okay?” “You look young my boy how old are you?” As he asked that I look around at the place I was in. Red grass, green sky. “I'm 14.” “Where am I?” “Your in Tierra Loca.” “What's your name my boy?” The wind blew the hair out of my face. “ok around at the place I was in. Red grass, green sky. “I'm 14.” “Where am I?” “You're in Tierra Loca.” “What's your name my boy?” The wind blew the hair out of my face. “My names Mill.” “OK, Mill the world Is your car now its time to kick it in your ideal speed.”


I then started running. I was Curious what this world is like. I then saw a town. In the town there were people with Pink hair, and purple hair. I then look at my front hair and it starts turning purple. I then saw Rafael behind with a weird dial thing. There was a night setting, mid day setting, Sunset set. I choose the Sunset setting. I guess time goes at whatever speed you want in this world. I look around I see tons of different buildings, Blueberry Girl building, Fruit Bounce Building, Vine esk building. So, much to do. Where do I even start? Fruit Bounce Building sounds fun. I then walk in the building and collapse into a raspberry looking thing. It bellowed into itself. Then I Bounce to the Blueberry. Then to the... What! That's a bouncey grape. Then I see a girl and accidentally slam into her. “I'm so sorry.” “It's fine I love being squeezed into the fruit, he he.” She had pink that ended up going a little past her shoulders. She had the cutest green eyes.


I then kept running after the girl. Something kept me running towards her. Was it the fact that she was cute, fun, I just kept chasing her. Boing! From one fruit to the next. It's weird bouncing on fruits. The girl goes up behind me and almost gives me a heart attack. She then does the no finger to me. Then she pushes me into the fruit. “Wanna go,” She says with one hand to the side of me. “Just kidding.” I look her as I get up. She is so beautiful, I Mean wow. We both exit the room and go back out into the world of Tierra Loca.


“Where should we go next?” “What's...your name?” I say sounding a little nervous. “My name is Maple.” I look at her, thinking. What should I pick? “Can we go in the Blueberry...Girl Building?” “Sure, you sound nervous my boy have you been around girls often?” I tremble while blushing. “I'll take that as a no.” She then takes my hand and rushes me into the Blueberry Building. I look over as I saw a machine. This is the three course meal gum from Willy Wonka. My all time favorite. She takes hold of my hand. “Let's chew together.” Then we start chewing the gum. It was amazing. Tomato soup I could feel it going down my throat. Roast beef, Blueberry pie and ice cream. Then all the sudden I see Maples nose turning blue. Her whole face then starts turning blue, it almost had a violet tint to it. Are we actually going to turn into Blueberries. Then both of are tummies start to swell with juice. We were both getting bigger, as we could barely walk. Then we start becoming a half immobile as our legs get sucked into our body. Then are arms get sucked in as well, we were full immobile Blueberries, as least ten feet in length and I felt super tight. How the heck are we going to get out of here.


Then all the sudden we return back to our normal selves outside the building. We'll that was weird. I guess Maple is just, I don't know she's an interesting case, there is nothing like her. I look around I see buildings, upon buildings. Until I saw one that caught my eye. It said restaurant Galore. I go inside, and I see Speakers blasting bass everywhere. We hop on one of the seats. I looked at the menu. One said Indie. One said Country. Another said EDM. These are all kinds music genres. I'm intrigued to say the least there was a description of the the genres, I could tell. Country more acoustics more to twang. Indie makes you feel sad, sometimes acoustics, and decent amount of bass. There was a description for all of them. I found the Folk and decided to eat that one.


Before I knew it the waiter came out with a bowl filled with vines. I took a bite of the vines and it tasted good I could taste Folk. It transported me to a grassy plain for a second a folklore of some sort. “This is awesome Maple!” I felt more comfortable now. It was like that whole room before made me feel kind of uncomfortable, and now I'm feeling slightly more comfortable. This is a journey I can feel that is. For me to get more comfortable around girls and as well find my niche. Then we both exited the room.

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