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Life and Love , Hope and Pain

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Summary

A collection of my feelings and thoughts of my inner child incorporated on paper ...

Genre
Poetry
Author
Zartaj
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
9
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

STAY

She looked at me with those beautiful eyes

And all I could see was loneliness inside

She looked so sad and I wanted to ask

In the shine of her smile I wanted to bask

I held her hand and told her that I ,

Would never be apart but it turned out a lie

If only I could say how it ached my heart

To leave her broken and so torn apart

But I needed to do it cause I thought it was right

I forgot that at the end there's always a light

I needed to do it , I couldn't STAY

So , I ended up going too far away

Now , when I went back to atone for my wrongs

I saw her laughing and singing a song

I came to know that she had left far behind

Her pains and hurts and her trust for me blind

I am writing it now as a warning to you

Never leave your loved ones cause there's always a clue

There's always a path , There's always a way

So don't you leave , remember to STAY ...





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