I Want More!

"Heyla! I'd like to make note that this review was on the story as it exists on April 8, 2022. There could have been some massive changes since this review, making the story even better, so I encourage you to take a look at the story for yourself! With that out of the way, let's move on to the review! Plot 5 Stars: The plot is tight and solid. We know who Rose is, what's plaguing her, and how she's given a gift that will ease her pain. Things are ramping up in chapter 2, already, promising a lot more to come! Writing Style 5 Stars: I really feel like I'm in the tortured mind of a trans woman. I can feel her personality oozing from the pages, getting a sense of who she is with her story, without her having to state things directly. Word choice and sentence and paragraph structure are superb! Technical Writing Skills 5 Stars: Superb! It's obvious the author went through great pains to edit this story so that it shined at its best! Overall 5 Stars: The plot is solid, the writing style is wonderful, the technical side is lovely, the characterization and world building is on point. I love this story and everything about it!"