Inkitt
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Love it

"Such a lovely story to read. Love all the characters "

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My Son's Mother

"It is a very nice story well written. Penned very well. Cool and clean without much of drama, and ofcourse final episode was very romantic. I like it. Thank you Author "

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Cute

"This story was really cute 🥰. There were some editing needed but other than that I really enjoyed reading this story and I’m happy Anna, Daniel and Abby found each other and made their forever home and love within each other. Thank you to the author for sharing this story."

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My son’s mother

"Very beautiful story Love it"

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My sons mother

"Loved the premise of this book. Would recommend "

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My sons mother

"Compelling reading but rather an obvious story line .It is written as if the author is not English and the translation grammar is not great."

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Awesome

"lovely story. Feel like reading continuously"

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Review

"Grammar - tenses and pronouns seemed incorrect in many places... enjoyed the story inspite of the small misses"

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Hi si far good. When will this novel get updated with the completed. Will we get notification if it updated also.

"Hi I disliked the fact that the complete novel was not posted and even it's not getting updated on regular base. I would have recommended this book to my friends only if it was a completed on"

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My son’s mother

"The story is really interesting and one thing I disliked was the grammatical error and change of subject"

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Good

"I liked everything"

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HIDDEN LOVE EXPOSED

"I do like the novel despite the little mistake n I would love my friend to read it too. The author really dis a good job 💋💋💋❤❤❤"

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My son's mother

"It's a nice book"

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Kkm

"It was good I liked it Story plot is good "

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My son mother

"Lovely stories. Short but you will learn someting love will win."

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My son's mother

"The novel is very interesting and informative "

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15 chapters in

"I read up to fifteen chapters and I have to say other than the missing commas the author didn't miss a single thing when it came to this story. The characters are relatable and I thought the story was really sweet."

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Good story

"Update early new chapter"

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Lovely story i like this one very simple and original

"Very good story "

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Good story but horrible writing

"Grammatical skills were horrible throughout, but the story was good. Stories need to be edited better. The return of Stella really added nothing to the story, and where did the guards come from?"

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