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Mourn

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Summary

To mourn someone who's gone. But not Dead.

Status
4yrs ago
Chapters
4
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

No Words

Dearest...

You're gone. Our paths untangled.

No words said. No goodbye.

No warning. Why?

I mourn this loss.

But you are fine.

No words I say.

Because too many I have already said.

I have implored for your return.

To the heavens. To God.

Too many pleads. Too many tears.

I've forgotten the bond that unites us.

You left without a warning.

No words were said.

The last I remember you say...

"Don't you care about me?"

A few words. Without a thought.

How could I not care. I saw you.

The beginning of you.

Your wonders your defects.

I chose my words.

Carefully,

"Don't dare ask such a thing when you were the cruel one."

No more words.

I mourn in silence for you.

I've begged for your return.

For you to reflect on what's wrong.

No words.

You ran away.

Because to you words can only cause pain.

No words...

Because to you they are a tool

To form your lies.

I saw your beginning.

Sister...

With all you've done...

I still miss you.

But still they are just words.

And here I mourn.



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