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Some spelling mistakes

"There were some spelling mistakes but everything about the book is amazing "

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Till death do us part

"Wow!! I never read this long in a story but could not it down, thank you so much for wonderful story!! Love it!!"

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Till Death Do Us Part

"I throughly enjoyed reading this book. Can’t wait to rad the next one"

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Live a life

"Story is so engrossing ..but it's bit stretched with other characters "

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too good

"i love love love it it's play is good i think it's best seriously would read it a lot perfect structure tooo impressive "

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Good

"The book is very interesting, exciting and make you want more, but there are a lot of words that are not in the right context. You would think the author would notice this or someone would let her know so that she would edit it correctly. There are a lot of run on sentences, not enough punctuations. Where there's a question, there's a comma instead of a question mark. Where the sentence should end and begin a new, there is a comma instead of a period. Throughout there are a lot of errors, but the book is awesome, the plot is good and I can't wait to read more."

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Alps Pate

"I liked the story very much, I cried all the time when Jared jeft Jess alone during he first 5 months of pregnancy."

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Roller coaster marriage

"This novel was very entertaining. I actually laughed and cried while reading. Lots of action, growth of characters and pretty good erotica scenes. I feel like the book just ... ended. No real conclusion. I'm hoping there is a follow-up. (I really want a happy ending for this couple). The spelling and grammar in this book is terrible. Simple things like two, too, and to; you're and your; there, they're and their; tuff instead of the correct tough. I'm not sure if this is a first draft or not, but this needs to be cleaned up - it makes for a more difficult read. There are a lot of typos too. I usually can figure them out, but sometimes I have to read a sentence more than once to have it make sense. "

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Weak female lead

"I stopped reading when she just forgave him for leaving her for nearly five months. Through out the whole book she stayed a pushover. Z"

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