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recommendations
"Love the thumbnail! Anyways to the point, I recommend that instead of doing this (Character name-) you should use quotation marks! (" ") There should also be a bit more narration so we can know the exact place and what else is going on, just having the characters speak is gonna throw some readers off, and make the reader disengaged. Love the story though! Thank you <3"
It reads like a children play
"A stunning work of fiction. I couldn't help but love how a bunch of teenager aren't afraid to express their love for the other. I recommend this to anyone interested in children fiction."
