What is your opinion?
Hidden Fellings. I like how the story was easy to understand, and how there weren’t big vocabularys. I also love how the story ended!
"I love how the book is easy to understand, and how the author didn’t use big vocabulary words. I will recommend the book to people who love romantic stuff. But I don’t like how Rosa didn’t give birth before the story ended. I wanted to know the name that Rosa would give to the baby."
Hidden Feelings
"Excellent reading shows how some people when thrown together who supposed don’t like each other can be drawn together "
Hidden Feeling
"I found the book very interesting, well written, grammar very good."
Hidden Feelings
"Short and sweet story 💗💗💗💗"
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"Sweet story!"
Hidden feelings
"It is well written, a nice book, i loved ir"
Hodden feelings
"Very very seeet story. Just the right length. Very well written and super easy to read. I am much enjoying. "
Forgot
"Some what ol"
Great
"Really enjoying "
This is really good! good and I can't wait to read more!
"I wasn't expecting this good being that there is only a couple chapters, but this is really good! I love it!😆"
Hidden feelings
"It was a lovely and romantic story. Great job on your book😊"
Hidden feelings
"Beautiful book "
Hidden Feelings
"This is a simple tale written well told adding to something if nothing. It has a technical brilliance a style but what is so catching about it is the story telling. Almost as simple as a Mills and Boon yet added to this are the children. I want to see more. More of what I want more of the brain for the technic is there and all that writing is there the story is there but what about love stories are they simple or simpler?"
Awesome
"Im not a writer and I've always hated reading but this book was awesome"
Amazing
"Very nice. Makes me want to keep reading 😄😄"
Hidden Feelings
"I am a huge romance junkie (it's a guilty pleasure) and this really sounds like something that would come out of a Nicholas Sparks novel. There are just a few things I would like to address: PROS: 1) The overall story/plot is very much your own and I love that: the main characters, the children, the love/hate relationship between Luke and Rosa and, of course, the ending where they finally get together for good and start a future. 2) The way you describe things (rooms, weather, appearances, etc) is wonderfully done. (However, look to cons). 3) I could tell you were passionate about writing this and that's wonderful! The passion SHOULD be felt by the readers so bravo on that! CONS: 1) Regarding to my upper statement about describing things. You're very good at this BUT try to incorporate said descriptions throughout the novel instead of dumping it all out at once. I used to do this a lot when I first started writing and then as I started to write even more, I realized that we need to just say, (just thinking of an example off the top of my head here) "Ruby was a pretty girl with black hair, big brown eyes, and ruby red lips." Try something more along the lines of, "When Ruby spoke, her eyes shined like almonds brightly lit by the overhead crystal chandelier in the open foyer." See how a description of Ruby AND the house/setting is being described without it being a list of things? Also, for houses, "She stepped through the long hallway, her fingers guiding her in the dark and she could feel the old, peeling wallpaper on the tips of her fingers." Try to spice it up a bit! 2) I highly suggest an editor, even if it's a close friend or a teacher. There's a lot of good websites and books for grammar and also a lot of good programs. For awhile I was using grammarly (grammarly.com) but had to cancel because I could not afford it anymore. Your "voice" is amazing, your characters are three dimensional, and your plot is fantastic but I feel like with some grammar overview, the reading aspect would be much smoother. Other than that, I overall really enjoyed this and gave the story five stars for "overall" and "writing style" because you are super talented!"
Hidden Feelings
"Short good story. But was waiting for more, like luke's brothers and her sister... Things behind it"
Good
"Love this story"
Hidden feelings
"🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹"
Hidden Feelings
"I certainly am no expert,but I enjoyed reading it and think it is a great accomplishment to make a story flow and keep the reader interested. Best of luck."
