What is your opinion?
Coming Clean
"Interesting story. I enjoyed it so much and became hooked to know the ending of the story. The end of the story is not as I expected it to be. Well done. You are a very talented writer, you managed to write Annie’s and Mim’s guilt and Annie’s emotion brilliantly."
Great
"Not like most of the stories I read on here, but I really liked it well done! I wish she told Pete the whole truth as well."
Annies syory
"This is a different story for me but it has been a nice change. I am anxious for the ending."
Well...that was unexpected!
"Give this story time to evolve. It's not what you think it is. I have to admit, I didn't really love the main character, Annie, at first but the deeper I got into the story and actually began to understand her as a vehicle for the story's plot, my dislike subsided. She's perfect in delivering this story. Neurotic and selfish at times but an excellent reflection of those very human qualities that all of us share. There's this amusing theme that runs through the story of cleaning, and how it can be so soothing and distracting from the painful truths the main character is hiding from. I think many people can relate to this and this made many of Annie's thoughts and observations seem so genuine. Mim is just fantastic. What a wonderful character, an excellent balance the running neurosis of Annie's inner monologue. There are some very surprising chapters that seem to just come out of left field, delivering a writing style and subject matter that would be out of place if not for the important insights and development they provide the different characters. In the spirit of constructive criticism, this story needs a tight edit in terms of occasional grammar and punctuation errors. I also noticed a flipping of tenses but this could be intentional, given that it is written in a first person voice, It was not distracting from the quality of the story. I think this story has a very honest core that is nicely dressed in interpersonal mystery that spans generations. I think this shines through so beautifully in the last chapters. No peaking or skipping to the end! Coming Clean is worth your time."
