I'm Batman

"So I love the concept but there were just bricks of words and then the unseperated dialog and nearly any space. But with that said I would love to see more chapters instead you the author fixing the first chapter. Mainly only for one reason. Because like every single writer on this planet the more a person writes the better the writer. The more person edits the least amount of writing happens. But hey at least you'll be good at editing. LOL. What I'm saying is I want more chapters and your grammar could use a tad of tinkering."