u need improvement

"so i don't know much abt pokemon since i havent watched it for years now. the plot is good. I just wanted to say a few things 1st - no grammatical mistakes, its better to proofread. if it's ur first story then its better to make a first good impression. 2nd - wording can be better. read more books, it helps with the vocab and forming better sentences. 3rd - longer chapter, more informative. overall the plot is good but u need to up ur writing style cuz tbh it looks like it's written by a 10 yr old. tip - if u read more books ur vocab increases and u can express urself better :)"