Inkitt
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Don't call me biased

"AHHHHH! me likey lots, and no I am not being biased. I don't really know how to write a good review, and I suck at grammar so I can't really tell if your's is bad or good XD Your plot was salty, Which is better than sweet. The images are very strong and colorful. I only have one question: why was Sunny stressed? Write more!!! love you more. =P"

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