Short Review

"One chapter in and the story was filled with a number of structural errors. The paragraph was short and didn't really offer much in terms of description and detail. We are not well-introduced to the characters with the exception of that brief flashback at the beginning (at least I think it was a flashback). Punctuation and capitalization seemed heavily neglected. The synopsis was interesting enough. The story? Not so much. Considering the fact that it's the first chapter, the author should have put more into introducing us to the characters. The whole structuring was choppy at best. "