What is your opinion?
The Luna That Became A Vampire
"This book is short but I loved it."
more
"is there going 2 be a 2nd book 2 the luna that became a vampire "
The luna that turned into a vampire
"I enjoyed this too much"
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"🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤"
The Luna that became a vampire
"I hope that there is a sequel to this book or that there's a series on it. "
The luna that became a vampire
"It was great but I feel like it could have had a better ending "
Interesting
"This was a good book. I read it fairly quickly. The storyline and plot were ok. The story was told in a simple way which is different than what I am used to. Keep up the writing I look forward to reading more from you "
Good
"The story line was good and interesting but it felt like it was written for kids. The story was also too short i expected more content i wish you could have done more. Apart from that good job"
Well I think it could be better I didn't really like the ending it was kinda rush and cause she forgive him to fast but that all the other parts we're great 👍😃
"I like that she turned into a vampire in how she went badass in won vs Zack in how she ordered her son's "
Nice Concept
"The story has potential, and i do like the plot. it’s just that it feels very very rushed, and lacks character development. It reads more like a diary, rushed without explanation. loads of room for improvement, but with enough time and effort i believe this could be a great novel!"
Has potential
"The story line has so much potential. You had fantastic ideas but there were so many holes within the plot. Ideas were not fully thought out. Scenes were rushed. If you would have slowed down this book could have been at least 30 to 40 chapters. Grammar and punctuation also needs to be revisited. Every thought and idea seemed rushed, this is why it's only 49 pages. You have condensed 3 to 4 chapters into one and it doesn't read well. I would suggest for your next book to expand your ideas. Let's use Suzy for example, we know she wants to be Luna but there is no character development and why did she get upset when Luz killed Zack? Was that her true mate? Was she working with him to end the silver wolves? There is no context to any of your plot. Also why is everyone still ok with her dad and brother? Even after everything they did to her they faced zero consequences. "
The Luna that Became a Vampire
"Was kind of boring as it didn't really have a plot twist. Lots of spelling and grammer errors. Was a tad to short."
