What is your opinion?
The Pause
"The Pause is a suspenseful tale set in the chilling backdrop of a small town that beckons it's visitors with an ominous welcome and an even more ominous advice. The protagonist who remains nameless at this point has no choice but to spend the night after a long drive that seems as unfriendly and fruitless. However, an innocent night-out morphs into the stuff of nightmares as things begin to go downhill soon after the MC notices bizarre occurences and a 'groundhog dayesque' time warp. The story is still in it's initial stage but carries promise and a potential to be nothing short of a great read. With very few fumbles mostly dealing with prepositions, as we all know how ruthless they can be, the story is without a fault both in plot and pacing. A few tweaks here and there and it is book-store ready. If you're a fan of nail-biting thrillers with a penchant for the unknown- 'take a pause', read the story, for you'll surely not want to leave. "
Fantastic
"Felt like I was trapped in my own head, I suppose this was the author's intention. The claustrophobic feeling adds to the intensity. I can't wait to read more."
^0^
"Oh my gosh this is so good. The plot is absolutely amazing and the story is great. The writing is really good and goes into detail giving the reader something to visualize in there head and these first three chapters really gave me the hebee jebes. I can not wait for the 3rd chapter. Please write more. ^-^"
