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A great start

The book is definitely a good read! The story it is in its initial stages, so my review might not do justice to the literature that will follow. The plot of the story is captivating and the MC is hilarious! I loved the sarcastic undertones employed in the book. I am getting the feeling that the characters will ultimately develop into likable personalities. All in all, it's a great start to a fun story!

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A Great start!

The book is in its initial stages, but I could very well sense the tension and suspense building up in the beginning chapters. The author has created a dark, grim world of drug cartel and the MC is an important part of it all, There seems to be underlying mysteries about the deaths of some characters which might prove significant in the following chapters. Character description seems to be a strong-suit of the author, and apart from some minor typos, the book definitely is a great read!

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A personal favourite!!

It has been a really long time since I have read a sci-fi book of this calibre, and I was pleasantly surprised by my find. I am so glad I chanced upon this book. There seems to be not one, but two particularly significant sci-fi mentions in the book I would love to talk about. First, is the SCR, which is closely reminiscent of Dyson's sphere and Alderson's disc; and truth be told, you did a great job at the explanation! The author has handled the subject with outstanding discretion. Then is the time-travel part- As a devoted space-time travel aficionado (And also someone who writes particularly on this genre), I was so happy to find real-science parallels in the book. Not only was time travel touched, but also 'space-time' travel, with the teleportation ploy mentioned in the book, something that majority of the authors ignore.

The characters are well developed, and all the major science facts explained with such dexterity and precision, that I was so engrossed in the plot and it took me just one sitting to complete the book. Also the fact that the author has created such a diverse world, in just 22 chapters is noteworthy and a literary feat! The plot is inexplicably magnetic and combined with the author's literary prowess, the book is nothing short of a must-read!
Easiest five stars I'll ever give.

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Wow!

The book is no less than a piece of art. I was surprised by the fact that such in depth imagination is even humanly possible. We are introduced to the pantheon of Gods and recently I did develop an inkling towards mythology in general, and this book further aided in making my inclination an obsession!
I am still not done completely with the story, but it felt as if I needed to get it all out.
The story is a gripping tale of enigma, allure and mythology! The description of the story is 5-star worthy, and I can't thank the author enough for introducing me to this masterpiece!!

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Great read

A great story with awe inducing plot, characters and literature! This book is a breath of fresh air from the highly derivative stories of its genre. Not going too deep into the plot, as it could give out some spoilers, the author has masterfully captured the essence of the storyline and given life to this suspenseful creation!

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Wow!

The book is undeniably a great read and I can very well see reasons for the appreciation it deserves! The MC is wonderful and relatable, something that I find quite tough to pull off, so great job at that author!

The pace of the story is notably outstanding and I loved how the author has kept her chapters short and concise, without missing out anything seemingly significant!

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Compelling!

For all the video-game players and Resident Evil fans out there, this is what a perfect fanfiction comes close to! The author has given life to the video game characters with great personalities. Although the genre is action, but the humour employed in the book is enough to create a sense of connection with the characters. The author has an impeccable literary sense in terms of writing and plot outline and its exemplary manifestation is THIS book! I loved the story, and I can't stress enough as to how great it is. It is clearly visible as to the amount of hardwork and research that has gone into this book and the result is nothing short of a must-read!

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Engaging!

The setting of the story is magically enchanting and the author has clearly showcased her descriptive prowess in the book! I loved the archaic writing style and the pace of the story. There are still a lot of questions needed to be answered, many plot twists to follow, so my review might not do justice to the literature that will follow.

Overall, the story is a fantastical blend of enigma, drama and romance all in the right quantities! The characters are interesting and clearly a lot of thought has gone into the making of this story.
So, great job author!

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Beautiful!

Beautiful, that's what I feel is the right adjective to describe the book. The introductory opening of the book is enigmatic yet so alluring that it instantly pulled me in.

Your description and writing has a wonderful sense of sophistication and serenity. The symbolism you have employed in the book is 5 star worthy.

The author has admirably changed the characters in the chapters and I could connect to all of them on a personal level an art which I feel is a tough one to master. All in all it is a captivating read and would surely wait for future updates!

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Capturing

Well, for starters, I am an open fantasy aficionado. The summary pulled me in instantly as it consisted of the elemental powers which really rouse me.

Although, I have read just the first chapter, but I loved the description. The pace really is 5 star worthy, cause I myself love stories with a comparirively slower pace.

The description is really beautiful and emotive and I could instantly feel at congruence with the protagonist. The author has beautifully crafted this fantasy world and I would happily delve deeper in the book.

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Capturing, interesting and marvelous

Firstly, the plot of the book is enigmatically magnetic. There are different characters, with different povs and different personalities altogether; yet we feel the unwritten common connection in all.

The writer has beautifully captured a child's thought process and in a seemingly very innocent way has also touched topics such as- night terrors.

Writing different povs with such accuracy is indeed a tough, but the author has done it! With the result being a wonderful compilation of innocence, naivety and sweetness. Iam definitely looking forward to the author's updates and new literary ventures.

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