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Peas, Porridge, Hot

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Summary

Story of an old man, long ago. Tales from across the US, compressed. Family, travel and triumph. Loss and gain. Thos collection is a patchwork of feelings compiled from years of life. Enjoy the hodgepodge of Peas, Porridge, Hot. Best served with whiskey.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
11
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Kin


….

Last I saw him

We spotted eagles over J’s

Criss-crossed on a bench

Sitting right on top of the water

The night skyline reflecting off it

Like a handful of beads on black

Chuckling and ashing on ourselves

Dodging security at the dock

Walking slowly back

Silly smiles and soft pats

A kinship like boats meeting on the ocean before a storm


Feels like a nighttime marathon ago

Each reaching for a new continent of space

Stumbling along

But you aren’t supposed to run alone at night


I miss my oldest friend

In the fray for years like soldiers

Ducking and dodging together

Slipping through dragon fire

Holding our breath in mustard gas

Sitting on logs for short respites

Secret rendezvous for long drags

Nods and compliments and stories

Exchanging a light hard to protect

In strong winds


I felt like your mentor

But perhaps I was more of a rival

Partnership secretly a joust

I loved you through barbs and lies because

I Do

And you thought I was a fool

Tricked like an animal in a snare trap


Well, maybe you were right all along

Because I thought we were brothers

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