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Sucidal note to God is a poem in which the poet is struggling to push his days without his loved ones and with life difficulties. The content of the poem is questioning God about poet’s loneliness and unhappiness. The writer tries to warn God about his problems in last lines.
Requesting to the omnipotent0
To take over my dejection0
then add further misery…0
better i will burn in pain0
am not your strongest soldier0
you gave me the weakest heart0
and filled it up with dispair0
Beyond what it can afford…0
Assume a filled jar,and what if?0
more water is added than its volume?0
It will spill!0
am not your bravest soldier0
keep making me more frustrated0
I will meet you shortly….0
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