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Can't stop

"Everything about this novel is amazing and hot all the right points. I am hoping there will be a part two to this because I wanna know how her life will be with the two love monsters. It is dark but loving at the same time. Didn't think that was possible. "

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Delicious

"This short erotica was so fucking good. I hope you have others!"

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Incredible

"That was so precise and incredible to read."

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Blood of the Rose

"What a stunningly well written story. The descriptive text was incredible, introducing me to a few words previously not known to me - callipygian is my word of the week! ๐Ÿ˜‚ Iโ€™m really looking forward to reading the full book of a very interesting throuple!!"

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Blood of the rose

"I really enjoyed reading this short story canโ€™t wait for more"

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great work

"The story was built very beautifully, how we saw characters through the scenes. I personally loved the story. It was focused the plot was great and we learned about characters. My favorite part has to be the way every chapter was built."

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Blood of the Rose

"Very interesting! Loving the smut in this book. Kinda low key wishing I was in her position. Sandwiched by them ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜"

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UNIQUE N VERY VERY VERY HOT ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

"Rich, heavy dictionary words loaded with spiceier n hottest flavour!! U must write more...u have amazing sense of writing but maybe use lighter or easier words as sometimes the reader may not be so well versed...with such heavy vocabulary u could restrict ur outreach..๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป U do deserve a prize๐Ÿ˜ƒ...my best wishes ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป"

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Absolutely love it ๐Ÿ˜

"Dark, steamy, passionate, and it would be totally worth if it would be a much much longer ๐Ÿ˜"

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Phenomenal!

"This short story is too good! Even though this genre is not my cup of tea, I really enjoyed it. You have pure talent, and this story should take number one in the competition. I'm rooting for you!"

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Blood of the Rose

"I really enjoyed the book and the passion in the more intimate scenes, and I'm not just talking about the sex. There is real intimacy in this author's writing that allows her reader to connect with her characters. Great job!"

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Vampire blood rose

"It's a very good story and sad to know it ended there. I hope you win the competition and even if you don't win, I hope this won't stop you from writing. Because you are a talented writer and have a wonderful imagination. I will be sharing this book with other's hope they will be able to read it before it's taken off. I really wish you didn't have to remove it thou. But all the best and thanks again for this awesome story. "

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Blood of The Rose

"So fucking hot! So fucking dark! So fucking erotic! This is a must read mini story for anyone looking for a fun and sexy read. Everything Datura writes is pure literary gold. I love love love all your work! Please never stop gracing us with your talent!"

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Great Short Read

"Loved it! I definitely recommend this to anyone looking for a short read. Canโ€™t to read the whole novel."

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Blood of the rose

"I can't wait to read the complete novel of this short story...it was sizzling amazing ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿฅณ.... I really enjoyed the story... excellent work author ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ‘โค๏ธ"

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Blood of the rose

"Oh yes. Vampires, blood, dark and explicit sex. Did I mention vampires. All this and a short and to the point story. Very hot. Thank you Datura Moon. Datura, my favourite and very potent flower taking me to surreal pleasures. "

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Simply Devine

"I loved everything about this sweet, lustful, short story. Brava dear writer."

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Good

"It was a good short little story love this author!!"

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Blood of a rose

"Wow. Just wow. This story was so good and unpredictable I canโ€™t wait for the full novel to come out."

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Amazing!

"Amazing short story! Use of vocabulary is pretty impressive, too! Hope the author write more of like this. "

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