What is your opinion?
Burning blood
"I am enjoying this read it is extremely spicy and alluring I am really wanting a compelling hoping exciting ending "
Aria
"This was a fun read, twists and turns everywhere. Can't Waite for more"
Burning Blood
"This story has an interesting concept and plot line. But I think the relationship between the FMC and MMC’s developed too quickly. She hardly knows anything about them yet she jumps into bed with them. I think there should have been more bonding, especially because her first sight of the knights was when they were screwing her best friend. The style of writing also needs work. In some places it is very childish (like the question mark and exclamation mark at the end of the sentences [?!] as well as the double exclamation marks [!!]). A good writer doesn’t need the additional punctuation. It’s also really frustrating to read in my opinion. There are a lot of spelling errors, which suggests that the story wasn’t properly edited. My biggest tip when editing by yourself is to read it out loud instead of in your head. That way you’ll catch the majority of the mistakes. Then let a friend or someone else read it to check for errors. Just my free advice for the writers out there. "
I am enjoying the story so far.
"I like the story so far. At times the spelling and grammer is frustrating. "
