Inkitt
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The story line of this novel is very touching and gentle.

"Keep writing these type of stories"

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Satisfying

"Though the story is short it's very good to read readers should go for it u guys will definitely like it"

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WorthWhile

"I would recommend this book to as many people as I can. I liked how the story flow thru with no misunderstanding and we got a full description of every character.. that really helped me paint a picture of them."

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Love it so much

"I can't help but say that it's excellent... Author thumbs up"

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Oh my god!

"I love this. This is so good! Instead of wondering what is happening next, I am wondering, "Why the hell isn't this a book yet? And why isn't this author hella famous?!" Good book. I can't get enough of it!!!"

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Mine To Forgive

"This book was very good and exciting. It was definitely mind blowing. It was very well written. "

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Mine to forgive

"The plot is ok style of writing is also good. Sometimes certain aspects of a story should be correct. How can you sleep with a man on a weekend then the next day you are pregnant and can see a bump? đŸ˜« The story is more of a romantic than detective. Thanks "

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Mine to forgive

"I like the novel it's nice but it would be abit better if they focused on the criminal more "

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Mrs

"I liked the plot and how the story was executed loved the characters and loved how manly alaric was"

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Mine to forgive

"Could be better. But overall it's pretty good. I haven't finished yet so that's all I'll say."

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Mine To Forgive

"Good story line but it was too predictable at the end "

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Don't know

"Thought I was reading a mystery but no"

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Mine to forgive

"I thought this book was okay. I couldn't connect with the characters, they didn't come across as real people to me. It does need a little editing also. I had expected more mystery/crime, than sooo much sex."

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Novel

"Plot 👍 is interesting"

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Can be better

"Okok can be better but not bad"

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More work needed

"Too many of the sentences are written the same way. Many began or focus on the pronoun "I". If you work to clean up and vary sentence structure, there would be more feedback to give."

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Couldn't pay attention

"Grammar and punctuation need a lot of work. Pacing not stable. Overall, too many issues to enjoy the story. Get it edited."

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Mine to Forgive

"This "story" should have the genre change becuase IT IS NOT A MYSTERY/THRILLER. I had a lot of expectation but I am DISAPPOINTED! PS. English is not my first language so I apologize for the wrong grammar, punctuations, etc."

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Average

"Average it is"

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