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What do you get when you tell someone that they can express their true self from behind the protection of anonymity? You get genuine representation. You get everything but the face This is my poetry collection. You'll get everything but my face. What's in the box?

Status
4yrs ago
Chapters
5
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n/a
Age Rating
16+

The Worm Father

This poem is a response to the piece "To His Coy Mistress" by Andrew Marvell. I wrote it as a project for school, so I won't be offended if you don't give me an A+ on this one. My English teacher already did. ;)


Had ye but world enough, and time

Your rashness, swayer, were no crime.

You could rush on and think no way

To dash and burn your long love's day

Till down by the old mountainside

Should you growing with rot reside.

Spend your tenure in reckless vain.

Burn it away in writ so plain.

The urges of man satisfied

But only until a shift tide

In your lusty satisfaction.


When youth doth burn its petrol free

It's wasteful nature meets their needs.

Those kin of mine diligently

Con and 'sume in finality

The fools that meet them at fates end

In vaults of stone, bodies broken.

Then on you my children shall feed

Your fine aged meat in misery


Say your vows. Proclaim fiery love

Burn with haste and hurry along

To feed my worms your sins and wrongs.

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