What is your opinion?
Intriguing
"This is an interesting story! From the beginning, it held my attention and I was truly perplexed as I tried to figure out what was going on. In the beginning I couldn't decipher if both Carl and Izzie had a mental disorder and they just didn't realize it but as the story progressed I learned more and it all makes sense now. It's a great story that'll keep you thinking. I can't wait to see what'll happen to everyone. Each character is so different and the way how they are all meeting will make for some interesting scenarios."
Interesting concept, but needs a lot of work
"I will definitely say that what you have in this book so far, definitely took me by surprise! It was really bizarre that Carl apparently had the two wives, Tia and Izzie, but what surprised me even more is that Carl basically has two identities within himself! That revelation took me by surprise, but I certainly found it interesting because that would explain why Tia calls him "Dave'", while Izzie calls him "Carl". I definitely did feel the thriller genre in this one, because the insanity that was inside of Carl was shown pretty well, that it made me think that he was actually totally insane. However, there some things that could use some work. The grammar in this book, is for lack of a better word, pretty bad. There are a lot of names and beginning of sentences that have been forgotten to be capitalized, and I think it would be better if you always made every line of dialogue into a separate line, instead of mixing it with the plot descriptions and what people are doing. It would also be nice if you added more backstory to Carl and why he has a different persona and how he came into contact with Tia and Lana. It was kind of hard to follow how Carl became who he is now, and I think it would benefit the book greatly if you added more into Carl's backstory. Overall, this book does bring out the thrill genre, but the grammar and lack of backstory makes it a bit hard to follow along with the plot. I will say that I did enjoy reading this, so keep on improving it!"
