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A simple poem that tells of the path that hope takes.
is my hope
a circle, never ending
kind of smudged
and only seen
through certain viewpoints
a different hue
of its own, blinding, reflecting
sunlight's true intention, true
display of its rays
the prism, my bokeh
is bright, beautiful
shows me my true
intention, my true display
of hope
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Cora: Decent story. Slightly predictable turn of events but I didn't think at this point it was a possible twist! I enjoy the stream of thought writing style this has, though some proofreading and punctuation could help a few spots. Recommend this for ebooks and forgive a few confusing errors. Enjoyable t...
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Helhall: Before anything else, I’d like to emphasize that I really did like the overall story. Characters were more than two-dimensional, so definitely a plus. I didn’t even mind the shifting points of view.But...There are a couple of things that made reading the story very difficult.1- Punctuation is your f...
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Margaret Lambert: Strong womenAuthor not frightened to show women with strength
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Suiihera: OMG, I just finished reading your story, and I really enjoyed it! The world you've created is fascinating. As I was reading, I could easily picture the characters, emotions, and key moments unfolding visually.Have you ever considered adapting it into a visual storytelling format such as a comic, man...
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Chrissie Aghedo: Great storyline. Left me wanting more for sure. A little different to the others I’ve read so far. Hope there is or will be a next part to this story
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A delicate one.. that can slip away anyone's heart to a lovely smile!👍