22 चैप्टर पढ़े
Very knowledgeable
"Very knowledgeable. Sounds like someone knows a lot about life and everything "
- कुल रेटिंग
- कहानी
- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?
0 चैप्टर पढ़े
Loved it
"Loved this story I could not put it down till the end"
- कुल रेटिंग
- कहानी
- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?
22 चैप्टर पढ़े
A dwarfs tale
"I like the author's use of so many fable characters. I would recommend this novel to everyone that appreciates these types of fantasies. "
- कुल रेटिंग
- कहानी
- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?
7 चैप्टर पढ़े
Good story, but needs editing
"I was intrigued by the beginning of the story for sure. The memory loss and disaster were done well, and soon more characters came along, expanding things and adding more and more backstory. However a lot of editing is needed because the chapters are too long. The story is interesting so I always want to see what is happening but there is too much information along the way. Simply chopping out a lot of random details would bring out the story much better. So far I've finished chapter 6 and will keep going."
- कुल रेटिंग
- कहानी
- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?