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His Perfect Doll

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Summary

Dark mafia romance type story (BWWM) Za'Niyah was kiddnapped the night of her birthday by false cops where she's forced to be trafficked for the italian mafia leaders son who is a psychopath . He's possessive and crazy and not afraid to show her the lengths he'd go to keep her in his grasp even if that means killing everyone she loves and making her watch before carving his name in her skin with his favorite knife. 18+ -------------- " Ah ah ah no more tears" His thumb brushed across my cheek wiping the few stray tears that fell. "Dolls dont cry and you my perfect doll arent you" He smiled at the broken look in you eyes before they some what sparkled at his last words. "Yes" you reply with out hesitation

Status
4yrs ago
Chapters
17
Rating
4.0 (4 reviews)
Age Rating
18+

Extraction from book


Third Person

“This isnt the love I want” She whispered.

“This isnt the love I NEED” Her voice getting a little louder, creaking at the end.

“All you do hurt me, all you do is break me to your liking”

“I wont lie and say dont love, becuase do, Just understand...... i love me............ too” She wiped a tear away heading to the door but stopped at the sound of his voice.

“So this is it, this all get for years of trying to perfect my self for you” His voice echoed in the room.

“Trying to be perfect in everyway you imagined” He gripped her arm tightly only causing her to turn and yank it away.

“Everything I imagined” She started rasing her voice to not match or over power his but to show her anger and fustration.

“How is what imagined is for you to cause me pain” she narrowed her eyes at him

" it shows i love you, it shows i care” He spit

“You care enough hurt me and beat me it nothing but abuse” She spit back.

" So this is why you wont marry me” He questioned stepping closer to her making her step back.

“You say you love me-”

“I do”

“Then why, why wont you marry me, why must you leave me”

“I have no family-”

“Then what am i” His voice dropped and narrowed.

" I dont know, the love of my life, my captor, my savior, and man who abuses me” She said and looked away noticing the hurt look in his eyes. She knew he thought he was right in how he acted.

“You- you cant blame me for that” He said softly

“YOU CAN’T LEAVE ME FOR THAT” He shouted causing her to flinch

“I KNOW. I know, you mother hurt you she didnt show you how to treat a woman with gentleness and kindness, She left you beaten and broken and confused”

“I-” He started but had no words to say.

“Your dad died-”

“You have no right to speak of him”

“He died and you didnt cry, you didnt pain you shouldve”

“Why are you here” He spit walking to the other side of the room

“It not like had a choice i was taken to be you GIFT, REMEMBER”

He through the closes thing to him which happened to be a lamp.

“I shouldnt of picked you”

“Then why did you” She screamed holding her hand to her chest tears flooded her eyes. He turned to her hastly making his way over to her.

" My mother left, she left me.. broken, what she did to me i thought- i grew up- i though it was how we treated people we loved.”

“I cant cry i have no tears left to shed” He spit.

“My father makes me choose a girl as i gift and somehow you caught my eyes and then my heart and now im here begging you to not let me fall apart”

“Promise me-”

“Whatever it takes”

“Promise me”

“I’ll love you til my dying day and onwards”

“Promise me”

“Just say yes to being my wife”

“PROMISE ME”

“I’LL NEVER LET ANYONE HURT YOU”

“Then what about you can you promise me you wont hurt me”

“No”

“Why cant you promise me”

“I dont know, but ill try”

“Thats all i ask”

“Marry me?”

“Yes”

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