What is your opinion?
Great
"I love the story line but it's somehow complicated I wish to find out the truth so that I can understand it more, but I understand that you're taking your time to go into more and full details but apart from that the book is great: I love reading it and I'm looking forward to more chapters. Great characters also and I will love to see them fall deeply in love with each other "
Good story
"This is a nice story and the characters are also good in nature and this love story is good and different from other stories. It’s good to read about it. "
Very interesting novel
"I like the novel and the plot as well as the characters. "
Lucian
"I’m not sure if she likes him or not "
Grammar
"I keep finding a lot of great reads that I forget to review and this one is very good besides the grammar mistakes I like the mc"
Enjoyable reading
"This book is a great read, some really small errors but that's it I really enjoy reading it "
Great concept
"This story certainly has potential! I love how the author described Sienna`s friends, they are all so different yet they care for each other. The dialogues are perfect and natural, they portray well the personalities of each character. As for the grammar and writing style, I only found a few mistakes in the grammar, and some paragraphs are a bit too long, maybe just revise the structure of the story. But they aren't big issues, it happens and I also struggle with it a lot :) Overall, great story! The concept is intriguing, and the story flows naturally through the chapters. Keep writing! :D"
Great idea and characters.
"Before I begin my review, I would just like to point out that even coming up with an idea for a novel, never mind characters etc, is really difficult, and here, the author has not only done that - but also written a total of ten whole chapters! That is certainly no mean feat, and for that I congratulate them. Now onto the review: Things done well in this story: So far, some of the main things that have really impressed me in this story are: .THE CHARACTERS: All of the characters in this story are unique and well developed. One of my personal favourites is Julie. The main character, Sienna, is also complex and interesting. .THE DIALOGUE: The dialogue in this story is realistic and never forced or awkward. I can always imagine real life people saying the things that the characters do. .THE FRONT COVER: This may seem irrelevant, but having a good front cover can be monumentally important in attracting new readers. Now, some things that need some work: THE USE OF THE PAST & PRESENT TENSE: Although it is a small detail, making sure that when using the past and present tense writing is always clear and coherent is very important to the success of a novel. This is something that the author should work on, and may benefit from having another person read through their chapters. GRAMMAR IN GENERAL: This is not uncommon on Inkitt and I know that I have issues with this as well, so it is not that big a deal. PACING: Once again, this isn't a major issue, but perhaps the author could consider slowing down the pace in some of the chapters as it is important that a story shouldn't feel rushed. UPDATE - Many of the issues I have mentioned previously have been resolved, I've left them there just to show what a great job the author has done by fixing all of these in their chapters. Overall, really great job on this story, and I hope that CK Black (the author) keeps writing!"
