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Brighton

"I love Sapphire so much, Its an incredible novel, I always check for new chapters everytime. "

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Great story

"I enjoyed this story it keeps you on the edge keep on writing"

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Interesting!!

"I love the start of the first chapter love a little darkness in my stories I did notice a little spelling mistakes here and there but the story is grate I don’t know if this the one you wanted me to read but it’s a grate story "

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Sapphire

"This is very interesting story, 72 among other girls are treated with disregard. She is a strong minded young lady and she refuses to give up on her life and freedom. her escape plan is good idea and I hope she succeeds. can't wait to see how the journey of her life will unfold. "

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Sapphire

"Love this book"

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Nice story

"I hope Sapphire will come back and Grace too. Looking forward to their reunion."

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An intriguing read

"Straight away you are dropped into a cruel world of slavery and abuse, and learn from a first hand perspective what effect that has on the main character and those around her. But quickly you are then introduced into a world of magic and the book takes you on an intriguing journey from there. I did notice a couple of spelling mistakes and you could break some of your sentences down into short ones to let your trader catch their breath, but those minor points didn't detract from the overall book"

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