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Momentarily freaked out!

"Man this book is interesting! Auntie was GETTING IT but I was freaking out because she was getting the love she lacked in her real life from a well endowed fictional character! I get why she went back but I really feared she would've stayed. Again, well written and keeps you at the edge of your seat, bed, office chair, etc!!!"

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Love GM Marks!

"Enjoyed reading this. GM Marks books are never boring. Love the writing style "

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Very creative

"I totally love your style of writing and bringing the readers into the story. I felt like Lilly when reading about Louise."

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Amazing one 👍

"Very unique and interesting story.... really enjoyed it 👍"

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Just lovely. I'm Lola and I enjoyed your book. Please read mine real or Imagination and tell me what you think of the plot.

"Writing in the third person sense was real good...it gave the story a complex and makes the mind imagine more from different perspectives. "

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Awesome

"I love the usage of 2nd person POV. I think it really makes this so startling, so personal. It reminded me a bit of a Star Trek Next Gen episode (when Bev Crusher went to her families home and got stuck with the family lover/ghost). Except this is much better. Awesome job! Totally needs to be published (if it isn't already). "

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Unnatural Instinct

"Good story, so different 😊 I liked the ending but was wishing she could pull him into her world."

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Love

"I absolutely love this so far "

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Definitely Intriguing

"The story reminded me of the movie , "Labyrinth" . I loved the twists and the ending . Very nice read indeed."

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Unnatural Instinct: Wishesnstinct: Wishes

"This story had me not wanting to put it down until I knew the ending. Great job author! Thank you for giving me a story to fall into that kept me reading each page for wanting more.."

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Unnatural Instinct : Wish

"Loved this book, So so good. Wouldn't we all want a love story that carries on forever even after death. Well written."

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Wish💕💕

"Enjoyed reading a lovely ending 💕💕"

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Really interesting!!

"New concept to read. Well written story. Amazingly beautiful. Highly recommended 👌 "

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Unique love story

"This is a different type of love story. It needs to be read. I love the characters, the details, the twists and sweet ending. So unique. Thanks for sharing your writing. "

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Unnatural Instinct: Wish

"Oh. My. Goodness. What a thoroughly enjoyable, unusual and vaguely weird story! Well written and edited; a dark romance that lit up my day. I truly don’t know how to convey my utter joy at reading this. I thought it was going to be a very dark and scary story but it is pure brilliance!"

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Unnatural instinct - wish

"Great stories with a plot twist. Not a typical romantic fantasyland stories where the heroin stay in damsel-in-distress mode but she strong and fight what the best for her. Indeed always know what is important."

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