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The Alpha's Assain

"Started off slow but kept my interest. "

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The Alpha's assassin

"For me with English ONLY a second language, I couldn't help but notice all the grammar mistakes... BUT what a brilliant story line. Keep it up Author. Maybe just (before posting), read, re-read and correct?! Now onto the next one. I will definitely follow you. Thanx!"

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Nice story

"I liked the different story line. Great characters and twists. Enjoyed reading the start of book 2 excited to check it out . 😊🥰"

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The Alphas Assassins

"I enjoyed the story. Short but well done👍🤗"

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The alpha's assasin

"Very enjoyable book. Something different but entertaining. Well done"

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The Alpha’s Assassin

"Great story, I enjoyed reading your book! I can’t wait for the next one! Keep up your great work 🙃"

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Alpha assasin

"Great and captivating"

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Great story

"The story is entertaining, with a great plot. There's minor editing that needs to be done, most common mistake is using the wrong pronouns in a sentence. "

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The alphas assassin

"I enjoyed the plot of this book and the characters and the fact that it continues on with characters in book 2 from book 1"

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Alpha

"Well written great love it"

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The Alpha’s Assassin

"Loved this book!! It was a quick read but held my attention the entire time. The emotional ups and downs were fantastic, and it wasn’t your “run of the mill” werewolf read. It’s refreshing coming across new and exciting pieces on this platform, especially ones as well written and professional as this one. Beautiful writing style and captivating story line, I can’t wait to read more in this series! Well done author, you’ve got me hooked!! "

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Entertaining

"The storyline is different and it’s nice to see that. I enjoy both the main characters for once. I just wish it had been a little longer with a little more relationship development around their relationship and maybe with some other characters. The grammar/spelling mistakes other people have mentioned were not as big of a deal considering some of the massive errors in some books I’ve read on this platform. "

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Alpha's assassin

"It is a good book that flows nicely. The only problem is there are a bunch of spelling errors throughout the book. They are not bad enough to make the book not worth reading just still they should be fixed."

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Alpha's Assassin Review

"To sum it up, this is a great story. It has romance, adventure, and brings a fresh perspective to werewolves. The main character is quickly adaptable to their situation and brings a fast paced plot I enjoyed. Like others have noted, the book does need some editing. But this was a very good read. "

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The Alphas Assassin

"There are words doubled, although the author thought of a better word to use but forgot to remove the first, and tense as well as masculine/feminine is mixed up sometimes which makes it hard to know who is talking and when they are talking about. That being said I loved the storyline and am looking forward to reading the next one!"

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