Interesting World

"Overall, I liked the world and the supernatural aspect. Some good suspense and mystery were going on with the ghouls, and the side plots between the characters and their dynamics were fun to read about. I think my biggest critique would be how the side plots more or less overtake the main plot about the ghouls and the politics of the world. There wasn't a lot of balance between the plots, and I found myself getting pulled out of the story a few times. But I do think this story and this world has a lot fo potential!"