Before the crazy
Lilian woke up knowing her fate , she was facing a new school sadly she was used to it because of foster care. This home was said to be permanent but this had been the case many times before. Of course she was used to it she had been in foster home after foster home for seven years. “Lilian time for school!” shouted Ms. Jade. “This is gonna be a very long day.” Lilian thought as she made her bed and got dressed. She wore plain black leggings and a blue blouse with sunflowers.As Lilian walks into the kitchen Ms. Jade looks at her and says “You could have miss the bus you ungrateful brat!” “ Yes ma'am I'm sorry.” Lilian says as she brushes her blonde hair aside.”I don't want your sorry apologies get out!” shouts Ms.Jade. Lilian walks out the door backpack in hand. She stands at the end of the driveway and gazes into the distance. She sees a family of three. She watches as the mom plays tag with the child. At that point she realizes she may never have this. Soon enough the bus pulls up but she's so infatuated with the family she doesn't hear it. "Little girl get on that bus!" screams Ms.Jade. Lilian walks slowly to the bus and up the steps. "Good morning." says the bus driver. Good is not the word to describe this day Lilian thinks to herself.
I think its amazing, You had me hooked from the first paragraph i read, your writing style is phenominal, and your grammar is complex and on point so very nicely done bestie UwU
Its a great book, i can tell the imagination and heartbreak that went into this so good job :)