Inkitt
Back to Story

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Chapter 1 review

"Great start to this book can’t wait to see more in the future."

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Nice

"loved the first chapter. Please update new soon"

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Amazing

"I love the book I hope it gets updated because the plot is amazing so far and I can't wait to see what happens next in the story"

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It’s early to ask for stars

"Why ask for stars this early on? The author is only introducing the lead female with a very light sprinkle of her back story. Thumbs up for not being riddled with typos grammatical errors in the first chapter "

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