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Fun and Thrilling
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Good idea, just maybe spread the plot out a little.
"It's a good plot, very interesting but there are a few things in the plot that needs to be worked on. 1. Instead of it being one day maybe a few days, this will give more insight to the characters and how they react to the arena. 2. Maybe do it in first person like the actual Hunger Games Novels. You can do it for one than one tribute and that will the reader a deeper insight. 3. The story was a bit rushed, add some suspense into it and make us shiver. 4. The ending could have been written in a better way, maybe dive into Blake's thoughts about his victory. Look I have been there, I written a few HG fanfictions, maybe you can read some and see what you think. Maybe it can help you with future novels. "
