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"So, a few hours earlier I wrote a very ungrateful review. I didn't consider the days of work this writer went through to make this story. Everything is spot on and very good, there is a few issues but I still highly recommend reading. "

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Cool

"I like it but don’t like having to give reviews in the middle of every story would like to finish reading then review "

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Great writing

"Truly mean it when I say that the author did some work. But the chapters were just too long for my liking and just killed the vibe."

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Hell Marine

"So far, I find it very reminiscent of Doom. At least up to chapter 3 I do. I like the characters and care for their well-being. Looking forward to diving into chapter 4!"

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