What is your opinion?
Sphinx
"I intensely like the idea of where the story is going minus the uneven flow of the narrative. I'd prefer to see the characters "fleshed out" more so that I could become 100% invested in them. Congratulations are in order for the author as he attempts to share with the reader his concerted passion to bring alive a story birthed within him, waiting to be unleashed. I am confident that as he keeps writing, he will find his truer voice. Pay attention to that grammar so as not to leave us in the clutch!"
Good
"The author has potential. Good plot. I love the thoughts of characters. My personal opinion is that the story has no or little flow. That is just my opinion, I by no means am an expert. There are a few grammar mistakes. I commend the author on their integrity and I hope they continue to write. Keep up the work."
