Promising start (reviewed at chapter 1)

"The author has a really good descriptive writing style that pulls you into the world in a gentle way that I enjoyed. Already in chapter 1 I can see the plot beginning to present itself, but not too much information as to be overloaded. The characters seemed relatable with human emotions and issues, but with clear research and understanding from the author of their chosen setting. I did notice one or two typos but nothing a good edit couldn't clean up. Overall a promising start."