What is your opinion?
Good
"Plot was good. Needed more though, kinda finished on a cliffhanger. "
No words
"There aren't many words for this story. It is just straight brilliance. Kudos to the author. I loved the characters especially. Very well written, and very awesome."
24578
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Crush
"It was a good read but somehow to me the plot was conflicting. "
Crush
"Description of characters physical features needed some work, needed more show rather than tell at the Sunday lunch, Dexter could have put more resistance in the car scene with Michael, but overall I thought it was an interesting story. I would love to see what happens next for Dexter, Linda and Jake. The overall flow and pace was good."
Crush
"I like that there are no grammatical errors so far and the story is flowing. I would recommend my friend "
