Weird

"It was just weirdly written. Like it reminded me of a book/script for a play. Like a script for a play that was attempted to be transferred to a book adaptation. But getting cut off halfway through the transition. Like the story is not bad, kind of bland and I think could definitely be picked up on the pace, the main character pov is great but she could maybe use a boost with just her being the main character Like she as a high school student should be more dramatic and less realistic. Especially in a book. Like high school students are always pretty dramatic. And not being a troll or anything. I hope to god I'm not coming off rude. See I gave a reason why the plot was a three and why the writing style was a three. Now as for punctuation and grammar I have to tell you it chalks up to the story being weirdly formatted in the way it is. For instance, the dialog tags are what they are. Like the mention of the character, then in bold and in quotation marks is what they say. It's weird because that's not how I was taught to write,.. And if this is just how this author was taught to write dialog then I guess I'll change the rating. But if that's not the case then I'm sorry it's wrong."