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The One That Got Away

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Summary

16 year old Sky lost her family in a tragic accident.The police sent her to unknown relatives. After some time of living with them, her foster dad hit her. Join Sky as she tries to escape his clutches Young Sky is tired of being treated like nothing. She was never treated like that from her parents. Her parents loved her, these people didn't. Carl and Carrie never truly loved her or cared for her. She had to fend for herself from the moment she walked into that house. She had never thought that one day her parents would be gone and she would be in such a terrible place. Sky was spoiled, innocent, and fragile when she first went to her new home, but now she is strong, brave, and selfless. She wants her family back more than anything, but everyone knows that won't happen. She thinks of doing something to change things around there but she was always too afraid to take action. Join Sky as she tries to find a way out of the hell that she calls home.

Status
Complete
Chapters
11
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Prologue

“I’m so tired of this!” I screamed at Carl. He’s my foster dad. Before I say anything else I will explain how it ended up like this. My parents died in a car accident and I had nobody else to live with so I was put in foster care with Carl and his wife Carrie. My birthday is July 4, 1999. I’m Sky, a 16 year old girl with a problem, and this is my story.

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review for review?

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@eirinnobrien sure. I’m always open to getting feedback and helping others with it so... I’m up for it

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