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The Filing Clerk

"I have never read Naruto before but your descriptions kept me on keel with what I was reading. This was a cute little story about date abuse and you kept it so your readers didn't want to go screaming into the night. Just enough to give the protagonist reason to worry and to intercede. Nicely done. I would like to read more of these characters."

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