0 chapters read
"What is available is great. There are some grammatical errors but easy to over look. What is not easy is the story being cut off before it ends. I hope for more but…"
27 chapters read
"I liked all of the book great story shame I couldn't add it to my library as I've a glitch but I would have loved to know what the sequel is called"
28 chapters read
"The story and plot are good... But the grammar not.."
23 chapters read
"I was practically living this book reading it and I loved it😍😍"
28 chapters read
"This needs editing! Other than that it's a very compelling story"
27 chapters read
"it was great. I loved the new term of hampire, I love vampire novels. u did a great job I love this book it was really attention-grabbing. I hope there is more to continue of this book. u did an amazing job"
27 chapters read
"Quite alot of spelling errors and no idea what the next book is called. It needs help but has a strong backbone. I believe with editing would improve the flow."
28 chapters read
"The grammar can be distracting at times."
28 chapters read
"I love a dark academia story. But this story was a total mess. It wasn't just bad spelling or grammar but the wrong words were used. The words were not homophones either. It made it hard to slide through it. I liked the characters mainly."
28 chapters read
"This book needs some serious editing"
28 chapters read
"The grammar was bad the story was kind of confusing but think it could have went in a good direction if there's a sequel "
1 chapters read
"There are problems with grammar, spelling and punctuation from the very first sentence all the way to the end."
28 chapters read
"The novel was a one time read. It was not gripping. There were few grammatical errors. After having read few vampire books, I was introduced to a new term - hampire. The writer has tried to be innovative and bring in twists in his story but has not been very successful at that. If you read vampire stories then maybe you can read this up. "
28 chapters read
"OK so grammar is horrible in this book and mileage doesn't go from 10 miles to 3 to 4 miles just because their mode of transportation changes...... It would be a great story if you didn't have to weed through all the misspelled words and grammatical errors "
1 chapters read
"Pervasive typos, emotional disconnect, expository, and thematic cliché I couldn't will myself beyond chapter 1"