What is your opinion?
this is awesome
"i love how this book tells the biblical story of creation, the theme of good and evil, but with extraterrestrials being mankind's creators. like this really makes me contemplate deeply on the story of creation and the nature of extraterrestrials. i find myself really engaged in this story and i would love to see this as a sci fi movie. wow.. this is amazing"
Wow!
"Beautiful and powerful!"
Unique Story!
"Being someone who enjoys stories with aliens and elements like magic, I enjoyed this Sci-Fi/Fantasy. I have loved what I've read so far! Megan Creech does a great job introducing her characters and making you care about them. Once the plot gets started, it's hard to stop reading! I can't wait to see where it goes! A must read for fantasy and sci-fi fans!"
Fun story!
"********Prologue through chapter 2: I just read the first couple chapters, and I'm really enjoying this so far! You did a good job setting up the tense relationship between father and daughter, and their relationship seems very natural. The dialogue in this story is really good so far, both between Mike and Jenna and between Jenna and her friends. I'm intrigued as to how the prologue ties in to what is happening in the story. The writing itself was very clean. I would have liked to see some more setting and description, but other than that it was really good! I noticed a formatting issue in there also. When you're switching between perspectives or scenes, it looks like you pressed "enter" several times. A better way to do this may be to use a line or a " *** " symbol so that it is more uniform. Just a suggestion. This starts out really good! I'm excited to see where it goes! Great work! ************* Chapters 3-4: These were really good. We're starting to get into the meat of what's happening. I'm interested in seeing where this goes, with the huge war and the Engineers. Having the girl that disappeared there was a good twist. I liked seeing Mike's reaction to what was happening, although it surprised me that Alex seemed more in control of the situation. There's a lot of mysteries here, but I think that you do a good job of giving the reader just enough to understand. Good work!"
The Star Bible - Book One: Genesis
"A very interesting story but I need to mention a few things. The word 'Dad' is a proper name so the 'D' must be capitalized. The same will go for capitalizing the letter 'M' in Mom. Please brush-up on your grammar skills. Incorrect grammar threw me off as I was trying to concentrate on your ongoing story. Did you also notice that the word 'creature' in your second last paragraph was mentioned 5 times. I am sorry to be a nitpicker but I hope that this will help you to improve all of your future stories. Please don't hate me. I am honestly trying to help you out. Len."
the star bible: book one genesis
"i ussually like themed stories like this story"
the star bible: book one genesis
"good story ever i read"
the star bible: book one genesis
"amazing story"
Amazing story
"I love the alien twist on this fantasy story. It makes me want to read more and more with everything I read. I love the writers use of foreshadowing. i think the only thing that is lacking with the story is maybe a little bit more details. For example, what the characters actually look like or more details about the rooms they find themselves in. Thanks and keep writing Megan! I can't wait to see more! <3"
Enjoyable
"It has a twist of aliens, fantasy, and the mortal that meets them. I enjoyed the star references, and the general set-up to the story. It takes a small tad for it to build up, but when it does the reader is left wondering what will happen next for all the characters. If you like sci-fi/fantasy settings then I would recommend this"
My critique of thru chapter 9
"I dislike that when I finish a chapter, and go to the next. The chapter I just finished is repeated...."
Excellent Start
"I assume you're using a word processor... You might consider setting all of the grammar and style settings active to address some of the passive voice and grammar issues. I also found some of the dialog a bit formal (people don't talk in good English and they use a lot of conjunctions.)"
