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Soo good

"I loved it soo much. I’ll miss it. 😩😩"

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Amazing story

"Continue please...😁amazing atory!!!👍🤘"

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Hiloo

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Good story

"Great story Author, all Doug it makes me really angry at times but that is what is supposed to happen 🙂 👏👏👏"

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Power to the Players

"It was amazing!"

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Good

"Great story. I wish it had a sequel. "

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Awesome and amazing

"I love how consistent the story lines are and how everything connects and I love how u stay on plot and there are no plot holes"

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PTTP

"I love this book 💞 Nat and Beck, Alexis and Charlie , so why not Sarah And Khloe Again 😍 they have a chemistry tho."

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GoodRead LGBT Young Adult

"I have been rereading this story as I am an original fan of yours from fiction press. Nice to see the story in a new light with edits. Alway love to read your work. Can't wait to read your new. #Team Natalie! Oh Beck makes me so mad lol : )"

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Love this book

"Please continue this book I can't wait to find out what happens next Natalie and becca remind me of me and my girlfriend❤ I think that becca was stupid for dating melody she should have chosen Natalie from the start "

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Great Book!!!

"please continue the book.... am totally hooked...... the book is soo amazing but is Beck stupid or what?? ...seriously why isn't she dating Natalie instead... Woow I can't wait to read what Natalie would do to get Beck back!!! ☺ ☺ "

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I liked it very much I wish more of this kind of stories or books 😁

"As much as it was Jesse irresponsibility to fall pregnant at her age and the conditions that she was living under but she never got selfish of allowing Lee to take the responsibilities that was never his. Good friends stood by each other in good times and bad times I like the characters friendship💖❤️"

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Awesome

"Love the story "

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Its good but too much

"The love story between the two make characters is good and wholesome but it feels like it takes a backseat in the whole book which isn’t good in a novel that’s supposed to be about the main characters falling in love. The book is too much. The author just adds way to many sides plots, characters and events and it makes it feel like the book has no core story. Its just a jumbled mess of god knows what. And the author’s writing comes of as juvenile and one note when discussing serious topics like infidelity, teen pregnancy, rape, suicidal thoughts and emotional trauma. There’s a-lot going on in the book, and in this case less would definitely be more. It gets tedious and boring when all you want is to watch natalie and beck fall in love but you have to waste your time on 200 extra pages of nothing and side plots."

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Enjoyable book

"I have enjoyed reading this book. Sometimes it jumps from perspectives with no warning but still good"

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Toxic !

"The characters are all toxic and have no common sense. Sorry couldn’t finish the story because of it. "

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