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Beautiful story

It was a very good story and I'm in love with it but there were not mature content at all but it was still a great story πŸ‘πŸΎπŸ€—πŸ˜

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It was a good story

It was a really good story, thanks writer for sharing it with us

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Amazinggggggggg

O.m.g. I'm completely and desperately in love with this story, and it took Tyler a long time to propose to Jenna πŸ˜‚ and I wanted babies for them too.πŸ˜‰ thank you writer for sharing it with us.

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Great story

I'm in love with this one, I want Josh too πŸ€—πŸ˜‚πŸ˜

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Very, very, very good story

One of the best story that I have reading laughs, cry, got mad. I have experience every emotion there is, thanks writer for the great story

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Sweet story

I'm in love, but I really wish that she has stand up to that wicked witch and to the people that bullied her other than that I love the story, thanks writer πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ€—

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Its Ruby or whatever get name is

🀨🀨🀨🀨🀨🀨🀨 in so angry that you ended like this, I know is that witch that have her why, why, why didn't you keep going until the end. Come on writer don't do this 😒😒😒

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I like it somewhat

I like itπŸ‘πŸΎπŸ˜‰πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜€πŸ˜‹

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Good story

I would love to read mature content but it was good and also you give us to little chapters of their happiness

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Good story

Good story

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Great,fantastic story Author

I'm in love with this story. Author you are AMAZING

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Wonderful

Every time I read your stories I'm never disappointed, you always put a smile on my face with them. Thanks for sharing it with us πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸ€—πŸ˜Šβ€

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Another great story

Great one Author πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Omg wonderful

Author you are AMAZING as always, bless your hands and mind for such of beautiful stories that you write πŸ€—πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘πŸ‘Œ

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Another wonderful story

Wao Author I don't get tired reading your books, they're Beautiful an meaningful, thanks πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘β€β€β€

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Wao β€πŸ‘

Wonderful just wondering Author πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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You are AMAZING Author, I'm in love with this story

I love everything about the story, it was Amazing

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Good story

Great story Author, all Doug it makes me really angry at times but that is what is supposed to happen πŸ™‚ πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Waoo just waooo

Wao it's all I can say, this story was amazing, thanks writer you are the best πŸ‘β™₯οΈπŸ€—

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Good story

I'm in love with this story, it's wonderful and the men waooooo ❀

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Good story

It was ok but it felt incomplete they didn't even find who was behind the attack or the other stuff that happened to them.

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Short but complete

A short story but complete and well written, very, very good job writer.

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It was a good story

It was really good, I fall in love with all of them, thanks writer

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Good story

It was a great story, thanks writer for sharing it with us

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It was ok too

It was good thanks writer for sharing it with us πŸ‘πŸΎ

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It was ok

It was ok not good as the others but ok

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Good one

This one was really good I'm in love with Steven πŸ‘πŸΎπŸ˜πŸ˜˜β™₯️

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It was better

It was ok but I still can't see what kind of love or relationship is that, she doesn't even have free will and she's treated like a child and I don't like that but every body is different and if she like it that way good luck to her πŸ‘πŸΎπŸ˜‚, thanks writer you are amazing because they're couples like that in real life πŸ‘πŸΎ

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It was ok

It was ok but it needed more and I don't know what kind of love was that but people are strange much of the time and like different things but this love was really bad. πŸ€”πŸ˜‘πŸ˜

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Waoooo wonderful

Waooo great story, the love making incredible and everything else too but my favorite the love making for sure. πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ€—πŸ˜πŸ˜Ž thanks writer for sharing it with us

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I didn't like the ending at all

It was a good story until the end, I didn't like it for me it wasn't an ending.

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It was ok

It was ok, it needed a little more, but other than that it was good.

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It was good

It was a good story, thanks writer for sharing it with us πŸ‘πŸΎπŸ€—β™₯️

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Waooooooo

Wao this story was wonderful, thanks writer for sharing it with us. You are amazing writing love scenes, incredibly πŸ˜˜πŸ€—πŸ˜πŸ˜β™₯οΈπŸ‘πŸΎ

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It was good

It was a good story, what I didn't get was the fact that he share her treat her like nothing and yet she love him, I don't fit that into my mind.

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Waooooooo ooo

Wao another great story, looking forward for the Viola story, I'm hipppppp waiting πŸ‘πŸΎπŸ€—πŸ˜πŸ˜˜

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Great story

Wao it's all I can say just wao. Thank you writer for sharing it with us. the πŸ€—πŸ˜β™₯️

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Good story

It was a good story but it felt incomplete, what happened with her friends and her painting and babies and the wedding. I needed to know all that, but thank you writer for the book.

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Omg great book,

I'm completely in love with this story but I wanted more, the wedding and babies, other than that it was wonderful

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Good story

It was a good book. Thank you writer for the story πŸ˜‰

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Another great story

I'm dying to read Brad story, and this one was totally amazing. Thanks writer for another great story πŸ˜‰

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O.m.g. AMAZING

One of the best story I have ever read, It gave me all the emotions there is, thank you writer for this incredible story πŸ˜πŸ€—πŸ˜‰πŸ˜Š

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It was good

It was really good, I didn't like the ending to much but it was good

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It was ok

It was ok but it felt kind of incomplete πŸ€”

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It was ok

It was ok, what I didn't like was that it was more narrative than the actual people talking

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All of the series were amazing

Excellent series, I'm completely in love with all of them but I still want Vince, Tor and Sting stories. Please writer

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Omg, it's all I can say

Omg I keep dreaming about this man, and the story is wonderful and so so so funny I laugh my heart out, thanks writer πŸ‘πŸΎπŸ˜‰

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Wao I'm In love

I was angry in the first 20 some chapters, but then you got me back in happy mode πŸ€—πŸ€©

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Another great story

I enjoy this story as well, it was beautiful plus I laugh my heart out with all of the character. Thanks writer, of to the next one.

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Omg I'm crying right now

The sweetest thing I have ever read. I want house and babies the holl enchilada πŸ˜‚πŸ€—πŸ€©πŸ˜πŸ˜˜β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯οΈπŸ˜‹πŸ˜‰

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Omg I'm in love

I'm crying like an idiot but in love with the story. I will like to know what had happened to Eric and I will have love to see Kate with a bullet just like she did my girl, but the story was wonderful πŸ€—πŸ˜πŸ˜, thanks writer

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This one I like

This one is really good, not like the first one that I almost ripped my hair out πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ€—

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Stupid man

I'm not happy with this at all, stupid, stupid, stupid man, I'm so mad right now πŸ€¨πŸ˜πŸ€”

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Beautiful story

It was beautiful I bit long but very nice, it was confusing at times but I love it, thanks writer

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Excellent

I'm in love with this one also, it has everything in it, I'm in love 😍

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Lovely book

Another great story, thank you writer for the amazing story πŸ€—πŸ€©πŸ‘πŸΎπŸ˜˜πŸ˜

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Omg I'm in love

I'm in love with the story the only thing missing was the true of who kill his brother and kids and a wedding for them πŸ€—πŸ˜˜πŸ˜πŸ€©πŸ‘πŸΎ

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It was ok

It was a little confusing and it make her look like a little bad but the love making was on point πŸ€”πŸ‘πŸΎπŸ€—πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‹

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It was ok

It was ok, it's not like your other books but I still like it

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I love this story

In in love but I wanted more for the epilogue I was expecting more but other than that it was wonderful πŸ˜˜πŸ‘πŸΎ

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I love this story

I'm in love with the story but I didn't like the ending I was hoping for babies and what happened with will and the doctor. The story felt incomplete to me.

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πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€— I love it

I'm in love with the story. If is was me I would have kill wylan and shayla they are rats that needed to be exterminated 😎

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I like the story

I like most of the story but it wasn't 18+ at all, and their were parts that I was lost but other than that it was ok.

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I like it

I like the story but not her character. She still blinded by her "parents" and I don't like that

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I like it

I didn't like the ending but I know it's not complete, other than that I'm in love with the story and the sex amazing πŸ€—πŸ€©πŸ˜˜πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‹

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good story

It was gikd, I love the sex scene πŸ€—πŸ€©πŸ˜πŸ‘πŸΎ

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It was ok

It was good but not as the others stories πŸ‘πŸΎπŸ€—

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It was a good story

I didn't like it like I did the others but it was a good story, thanks writer πŸ€©πŸ€—πŸ˜˜πŸ˜

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I love this one better

I will have love to see babies for all of them but I love the story and the sex amazing πŸ˜‚πŸ‘πŸΎπŸ€—πŸ˜

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Lovely story

Thanks writer I'm in love with all your stories and I'm looking forward for more love making πŸ˜‚πŸ€—πŸ˜˜πŸ€©

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It wasn't that good

I didn't like the ending it was incomplete for my liking. I like the mistery in it and the love making but I needed more on the end.

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Another great story

Omg another great story, I'm completely in love 🀩😍β™₯️

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Lovely

Omg, I'm in love this story have me crying like a baby πŸ˜πŸ€— beautiful

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Waooo 😍

This second book was indeed wonderful, it gave me all the emotion there is but it make me horney at all times πŸ€—πŸ€©πŸ˜πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‹

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Good but longgg

It makes me mad at time and happy at another but I think that was the intention, I just wanted to see a happy ending for all of them, even if it was with the ones that bough them specially the nun πŸ˜‚

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I'm in love

Beautiful story, I'm really in love with this one, now up to the next one πŸ€—πŸ‘πŸΎπŸ˜‰

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So so

It's not bad but it's not to my liking, too long and sometimes I can't pinpoint that I dislike

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Beautiful

Beautiful story but that woman I want to shoke her πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ good story

I'm really in love with this one too, up to read your other story, I just can't stop reading them πŸ˜‹πŸ˜ŽπŸ€—πŸ˜

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I like it

I like the story, sexy, hot and full of sex πŸ˜‚ my favorite subject πŸ€—πŸ˜œ

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I'm in love

Waoooo wonderful story, I'm really in love with their passion.β™₯️😍😘

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I love this one so much

I'm completely in love with the story that I'm dreaming of my vampire β™₯οΈπŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ‘πŸΎ

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Good story

I like it
But I don't know it's missing something

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Short but good

I'm in love with the story

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I love the story

I'm in love with the story β™₯οΈπŸ˜πŸ€©πŸ€—πŸ˜˜ thanks for sharing it with us

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I love this but I need more love making πŸ€—

I love the story, it's very funny

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It's good

It's good, but it's taking to long for them to be together and it's gets old after reading so many chapters of her running away from him, I want some love and read some sex scene like something different 😎

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In love with this story

I'm in love with the story, so much love, passion and sex πŸ˜‚πŸ˜œπŸ˜πŸ€—

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Love ittttt yesss I doooo

I love all the nuttiness and the thought of 3 in such a sexual way πŸ˜πŸ˜ŽπŸ˜œπŸ˜˜πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‰

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Love this story

I love the intimacy part but I love the way he treats her

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