Inkitt
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love the steamy scenes

"this book is very spicy the authors writes romantic scenes very good"

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Loved it!

"Loved it! I got lost in the story and the naughty scenes were great. The female character was someone you could connect with and I enjoyed her connection with each male character. The scene/intro could of been set a bit more but for a short novel it was good and got straight into it. Sometimes the little details and characters were overly described making it hard to picture and fluently read in areas but it was easy to get hooked with each chapter :) great work! "

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Loved It

"This book is so unique and amazing. It portrayed such an important message through the words that she string together - everyone woman can sleep with whoever she wants without the fear of judgement from others, loved it."

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Amazing

"This book is just amazing. loved it on wattpad and love it here. i would love to one day hold this book in my hands."

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Jake’s control

"Great story line we want more"

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Nice

"Hot & beautiful "

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one by one

"like fish in a barrel none escape"

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salacious

"I found it quite hard to follow the flow of this book,and the time frame was all over the place,which was very confusing.Unfortunately,the practicalities of having so many guys in one night without a shower scene kinda grossed me out.And there doesn't seem to be a proper ending,too many loose ends,which is frustrating.The erotic descriptions are some of the better ones for this genre, but again,the typos and missed words kept distracting me,so perhaps another proofread would be beneficial.Please keep writing,and remember that a review is only one persons opinion and it looks like there were many others who thoroughly enjoyed what you have written."

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