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Alpha seven

I appreciated the different take on a popular genre. The plotline was a bit choppy, and seemed quite rushed towards the end, often confusing the reader. I feel more wolf scenes were needed, however for a first attempt at shifter romance, the author did quite well. Thank you for your talent, and I am a big fan of your romance books.

Enforcing boundaries

Absolutely brilliant book and a completely different take on the shifter genre.I thought the characters were well thought out,the plotline flowed faultlessly and the story was fully completed with no loose ends.
Very few grammar areas and the first person writing style really worked well for this particular story.Top credit to the Author,it was a great book to read.

I'm here to fix you

Wow,this was a really REALLY long book.I love how the author wrote the story from a mainly male perspective,it was refreshing and different.This book made me cry in parts which speaks of the writer's incredible talent.There were a few things that I would improve on,firstly there were a lot of typos and misused words that got annoying, and there were a few too many characters that made it confusing to walk in everyone's shoes.All the shared dreaming etc was totally unrealistic,given that the book was a supposed autobiography.The twist at the end was really good and I enjoyed the emotional roller coaster but it was drama after drama after drama,which again messed with the overall feeling that the author was trying to create for the readers.Lastly the book is just far too long.It's quite daunting to see 1000+ pages and the journey through it all is quite arduous.

Fallon

It was quite a straight forward book which is nice to read,no convoluted plots or twists,everything was predictable and a pleasant story to pass the time.I enjoyed a strong leading character,even if it was a bit unrealistic sometimes,and I think the Author would do well to think of a few plot twists within the main plot and have sub character point of views to give the story more depth.Well done.

Quin and the crystal adventures

I have eight children and thought what better way to review a children's book,than to read it to them and see what they thought. The children in the same age group that the author is targeting said that they enjoyed the figurative interpretations throughout the story and the plot line was solid but they got bored with the micro explanations in the descriptive context. I enjoyed the great technical writing skills that the writer employed, it was lovely to come across something that had been carefully proof read, thanks.

Dueling Shadows

Sometimes you need to take yourself out of the emotional situation and read your own words objectively.I think this book had potential, but some of the descriptions over explained the same emotion or didn't deliver on where the journey alluded it was going. Make sure if you use a description, then it is factual otherwise it detracts from the story you are trying to tell. Keep improving and don't ever stop writing because a review is only one persons opinion,good luck.

Easton

I literally waited like a stalker on my phone for each time this story was updated. Easton is THAT good. If you love a spicy read with serious undertones and room to branch out into several books from other characters in the end then this is the book for you. All questions were answered and as a reader that's important to me. The plot and sub plot were well thought out and meaty, making every page a revelation. I absolutely recommend this as a MUST read. Thank you for your talent.

Twist of fate

This one seemed much shorter than the first book but crammed full of action. I absolutely love this trilogy and eagerly await the final installment. But I am not going to lie, the ending had me in tears.

Pieces of me

Brilliant story. I read this in six hours and can't wait to start the next book. The author is flawless in her delivery and the way she weaves the chapters so they flow naturally. Thank you for your talent.

Wolfe

I loved this book and eagerly waited for updates. The plot line was well thought out and flowed smoothly from one twist to the next. I love the flaws in the male lead and the gentleness of the female, how they were able to find love in each other despite everything else going on. A great read.

Erotica

I love your work and have read every single book, but this one didn't resonate with me. The plotline was vague, and felt rushed at the end whilst the characters, usually exploding off the page with personality, felt empty and not your usual flair. I think it could have done well as a series though. Thank you for your talent.

My werewolf professor

I have read every single one of your books and there is no doubt that you are an amazing writer, but for me this book fell short of the mark. After the last werewolf trilogy you wrote, I expected great things but the plotline seemed rushed and a lot of the storylines needed to be fleshed out more. For example, the relationship between Adan and Bria, or Adan and his own mate and the dynamic of how the two women would react to each other after finding out. It was still a good read though and this is just my opinion. Thank you for sharing your talent.

King Kruger

Wow where have you been hiding? I absolutely loved this book and the complexity of the plotline kept me invested right to the end. I loves the rawness of King and Jacob, Dustins battle with loyalty and the way two crews had to decide what was more important made this book so much more than just a romance. I eagerly await the next one.

That sik love

Wow. I was pulled into this mystery romance from the very first chapter and it has dominated my thoughts to the point where I found myself refreshing my page in frustration hoping Jescie would give more than one update. I became obsessed with Aero Westwood and his unique brand of affection and the plotline was so beautifully complex with all the twists and turns, the ending had me feeling 100% satisfied that Id read an entire book instead of highlights. Absolutely love this authors work and genuinely hope to collab with her one day if Jescie ever decides to genre jump. An exquisite story.

One man show

I really enjoyed the simple plotline and the awareness of domestic violence and the insidious way it can creep up on the victim. As always the raunchy sex scenes are hot as hell, and the characters are believable because they arent perfect. Yet another book by Lordy to add to my favourites.

The bad boy

The bad boy is well worth reading. There are some neat little plot twists and once again the author has managed to make her characters flawed enough to fall inlove with. And isnt it every nerdy girls fantasy to have the popular bad boy take an interest in her? A feel good read with a dark undertone so its not too sappy. Well done and I highly recommend it.

Dare to take a chance

I stumbled upon this book by chance and only started reading because it was part of a series. I am so glad I did. The characters are flawed, which I love, the storyline believable and it's so great to read about a strong woman keeping up and besting Aplha males. Thank you for your talent and I look forward to reading the whole series.

Crane

It's been awhile since I picked up one of Linz Vonc's books, but I'm never disappointed. I love the way the love burns hot between the characters, plot line is simple with a feel good quality that makes the readers feel happy and filled with hope. Thank you.

My brothers best friend.

First of all, thank you for writing your story. I felt that Mia's story was written by a very young person, and someone who perhaps has English as a second language. This being said, the plotline was okay, and the character developments showed promise, but I found it very difficult to read the whole book as it has some trouble with flow. At times the scenes were choppy, and the sex scenes were vague and unrealistic. I think with time and mentoring the author will develop more and her writing will improve to a degree where her books will be loved and widely read. Keep on writing, and thank you for your talent.

On your knees

I have read and written a lot of shifter novels, and honestly didn't expect much when I began reading this one. More fool me. Although there were some missing words, it was easy to figure out what they were and I really enjoyed the straightforward plot. It was also refreshing to have a couple who stuck with clear communication, and an Alpha who didn't go off half cocked. A lovely Sunday read, well done.

Dice

Alot different from your other work, but a great little twist at the end 🤫

A sliver of infinite.

You are a cruel woman. I bawled my way through the last three chapters, and it's now 2:30am and I'm too upset to sleep. This story is like a modern day Romeo and Juliet. It pulled me in so many directions I feel shattered, but would I do it all over again? You bet I would. Absolutely amazing story, heartbreaking and accurately portraying a mental illness that's so cruel and unforgiving. I have now read all of your books and will forever be a loyal reader. There's a permanent space on my bookshelf reserved for anything you conjure up. Thank you for your talent.

Kid

Once again my house is a mess, the kids are whinging for food, but I FINISHED it. Maybe I could do the housework in between updates? Jessie Hall is one of the most talented authors on this platform and I would love to edit one of her books. Kid is a gritty, erotic read, accurately portraying addiction and toxic love. The characters are raw and the storyline brutal in its intensity, but written so well it's impossible to put down. Watch out for this author she has an amazing talent.

Archangel

I don't usually review books when the author posts on my wall, but I thought I'd give this one a whirl. The author has good emotive descriptions, however the over describing of simple things in the first chapter detracted from the story and I found it hard to stay focused. My day job is an editor so I am sorry if my criticism is upsetting. It wasn't really my kind of paranormal romance but plenty of others have loved your work so that speaks for itself. Keep on writing.

Hawke

I had to binge read this in a day. Housework was left, the kids had to fend for themselves and my own writing took a backseat so I could read this book. AND IT WAS WORTH IT!!!

Old wounds

A pleasant closure to the original. Thank you.

My boyfriend's best friend

Linz Vonc is an author to watch. This is the third book I've read of hers and I'm hooked. The flawless intricacies of her character relationships are 100% believable and the plotline flows nicely. Well done!

Partners

A slow burn compared to the first two books, a lot of x-rated material which has slightly overshadowed any plotline but it's early days yet, still a WIP. I love seeing Adrien's sass, I just hope it doesn't turn into the overdone "she misunderstands what she sees, she cheats on him he cheats on her then they get back together" diatribe that many romance/ erotica novels fall into. Keep up the great work- and get Adrien a boyfriend already!!

The untold Forest

Every now and then a book comes along that stands out from the rest. This is that book. I love the complexity of the characters, and the different range of emotion your writing bought out in each reader. Only a true writer can make another writer cry. Excellent read, can't wait for the next book.

I dare you

An absolutely flawless sequel to You wouldn't dare. This book is filled with twists and turns in all the right places and takes you on a rollercoaster ride of emotion. I was literally waiting for chapters to be written and couldn't even return to my own writing until I knew how the characters ended up. Lovely and romantic, a tale of true love and overcoming obstacles, I would recommend this book to anyone loving shifter stories. In a genre filled with books to choose from, this one definitely stands out from the rest, well done.

You wouldnt dare

The main plotline is very solid and the way things evolve between the two main characters is realistic which a lot of stories lack. The storyline kept me interested from start to finish although sometimes I would have liked to have seen some more development of sub-characters. It was a choppy introduction to the main character's birth parent, and a few questions arose from that but overall this book is a must-read Well done on thinking outside the generic shifter plot and coming up with a storyline that has genuine depth.

Wolf's wife (monstrous hearts book 1)

Wow,I haven't been that wrapped up in a book in ages,it was absolutely flawless.The plot was unique and interesting the whole way through.All main characters had their own parts to play and the back story was very clear.Descriptive and emotive writing was excellent.This author has some serious skills.

Instinct

Absolutely loved this book.It was filled with spelling mistakes and grammatical errors so it definitely needs a good edit,but the plot was very well thought out and multi faceted,the characters were believable,relatable and behaved according to their ages,which is a welcome relief to be honest.I found the timeline to be really well done,and the descriptive and emotive writing skills are excellent.I would definitely read the next book in the series,well done.I also love the fact that the author didn't spam the end of each chapter with author's notes as this can be extremely annoying.

Just friends

I really enjoyed this book, there were a couple of things about the timeline of events that didn't marry up well, but otherwise the plot and characters were really fleshed out and developed.A few typo's and missing words here and there but nothing a good editor couldn't fix.My one disappointment was the ending.After spending so much time getting the reader to invest in the characters it was really anti climactic to get them back together,tell their parents,graduate college and go through major life events in one chapter.My suggestion would be to add four more chapters to the book to work through the scenes in real time so your readers could enjoy the full experience of their relationship.

Blood and chocolate

This story is written from a very young point of view, with simple vocabulary and repeated words,which tend to make the plot stale.I found it quite difficult to carry on reading past the second chapter as I really felt as though I was reading a high school kids novel,my personal view is that the shifter genre is probably not a strong point for this persons writing and they would more likely find their niche in teen reads.

mercy

Leila is one of my favourite authors,so I had high expectations when I started reading this book.Unfortunately it was nothing like the rest of her work and in some parts I honestly wondered if she was writing this book at all.Is this one of her earlier works?A lot of grammar issues and the book remained stagnant the whole way through.No real emotion throughout,and a lot of repeated phrases that would benefit from a thesaurus.If you are looking for a fluff piece to read though to combat boredom then this book is fine for that.

The culling

This story had promise,but the different pov within a few paragraphs quickly became confusing,and the typos were all over the place.The story needed to be longer in order to make the timeline more believable,and the mix ups between 'were' and 'was' got quite annoying.Descriptive and emotive text needs work,but the basic story line was sweet.I think the author needs to read more stories in the genre that they have chosen to write in as there are a few 'rules' with regards to werewolves that weren't followed,which an avid reader of shifter books would find displeasing.Please keep writing,as a review is only one persons opinion and shouldn't sway you in what you love to do.

Liam

I feel like this book should really be a part of a series as I have noticed the characters are referenced in the author's other books.For me,this book seems very rushed and unfinished,so I was surprised to see that it is marked as complete as it doesn't really go anywhere.There are no major scenes, or plot twists to speak of and it was a bit all over the place.I felt disappointed, since Liam was the character I enjoyed the most in Cain,I jumped at the chance to read his story,only to find nothing of substance.Please consider rewriting this book as it really brings the rest of your books down and you are an excellent writer.

Scandalous

I really enjoyed this book, the authors descriptive text is amazing and the story itself is not at all cliche.I would recommend a second editing as there are typos and missed words,but the book is that interesting that the minor details don't really matter.If I was being super critical I would suggest that the author try to refrain from using the same phrases multiple times during the story,but again this is only a minor thing.From one author to another,well done I think you have a great future in erotica.

unheard

The plot was solid,right up until the end where everything got rushed.It is a pet peeve of mine when I read an entire book,and then get to the last two chapters only to have things tie up like a news story.I enjoyed the first book way better but it is still a well written book and of a higher calibre than most.

Fantasy x

I usually follow this writer because of how brilliant her creativity is,however this time I was really disappointed. The ending was abrupt and there were parts in the plot line that were so flawed I got thoroughly confused.The military plot line,and buying and selling of subs within this is completely unbelievable.There is very little character development and the introduction of characters is totally random.Also Zac saying that he is trapped in the mansion except when he is out kidnapping,doesn't fit with his nightclub scene with his brother or when he comes to the university,or even the handing over of the keys.I expected more.

Silenced

I read a lot of books.Particularly of the shifter genre and I love the way this book plays out.Having a main character that is unable to speak in a traditional sense takes real talent to keep a reader interested and the author does this effortlessly.The descriptive writing is of a high calibre,and while the emotional writing does need work,the plot line makes up for that,it is solid and consistent the whole way through.I really enjoyed the humorous portions that were scattered throughout this book,and would have enjoyed more character development just to get a clearer picture of who the main characters were outside of the main plot line.Grammar and punctuation could do with a tidy up, but overall, Silenced is an entertaining read,well done.

All I wanted was a mate.

I understand that the author wrote this book as she went,with no plot plan in place,and it shows.The painful thing is this could have been a great story and the writer has an excellent imagination.I found that despite at the end of every chapter,it was stated that editing was done,I continued to find numerous mistakes and words that simply did not fit in the context that they were placed in,almost as if a 'big' word was put into a sentence to make it seem more adult? Shifter genre is an extremely hard genre to stand out in and I wonder if this writer might like to try her hand at young adult romance instead. If she is sticking to this genre I would suggest she sit down and put together a plot plan with main and sub characters, as well as major and minor events that will happen and then write them down in chapter formation so she has something solid to work off.It would also pay to follow some well known shifter authors like CW Swallow or KL Lord to find out about transitions and werewolf boundaries etc,as the story broke quite a few of the accepted genre rules.Please keep writing and remember my review is only my opinion and there are obviously people who really love your work, keep it up!

Big bad Alphas

The beginning of the book was well thought out and gave a sense of mystery to the two main characters,but unfortunately it never evolved.The main plot was very cliche and the age of the female lead seemed very young,based on her lack of logic and immaturity.The blurb in the beginning is misleading and doesn't really have a lot to do with the actual story which was disappointing and there was no fire between the main characters.It had the bones of a good book initially,and then waffled on into a series of bizarre decisions that were random and had no real conclusion at the end.I finished the book because I wanted to make sure I reviewed with an open mind, and after reading from cover to cover,I felt like I was still trying to decipher some code to access the proper chapters to flesh out the book a bit more,perhaps with some tough editing these improvements will make all the difference.Keep writing.

Way of the wolf: Oria

This book cannot be read as a standalone book. At times I was thoroughly confused by the insertion of characters that clearly have a backstory in another novel,but I wasn't privy to it in this book. Aside from that, the plot line was good, a little tricky to negotiate with how exactly she came upon her power and it was never made clear what blood her father carried.I found the characters to be well thought out and some of the pack mannerisms were unique which I enjoyed as well. Grammar and punctuation need redoing,as well as missed words which affected the story as some of the missed words were in important parts.This author has a talent for pulling people into the story despite the other flaws and I believe that she has enormous potential as a writer.

Royal meets Rogue

I enjoyed this story but the plot was a little thin, there were many sub plots that weren't finished,with one main character disappearing entirely partway through.Quite a few typos and sentences that were out of place,but I really enjoyed the main females character development.I would recommend more research into weapons terms and language text that is age appropriate for the characters within her story.I enjoyed the romantic aspect of the lead characters,but feel there needed to be more depth to some of the sub characters especially to fill the story out more.

The Primefyah

This is an exceptionally good sequel to The Gemlish girl. This author uses great descriptive text and the plot flows nicely,showing that there is an actual goal at the end instead of waffling on with the main characters ending up together.Aside from some minor missed words which is really easy to do and some spelling errors,the overall technical writing is some of the best I have seen on this app.I will definitely be reading it all the way to it's conclusion.Well done for a very entertaining and thought provoking novel.

His favoured Luna

I tried very hard to like this book,in fact I put it down when I got frustrated,and came back to it later many many times.The constant reporting of events in such a mundane way as he did she did he went she went they did they said started to distract me so much that I kept losing where I was up to,until finally I gave up.I would like to see the author use a thesaurus to change up the monotony of using the same words all the time, and try to give the characters more depth early on.A good book tricks the reader into identifying something within the main characters that they admire,or an event or feeling that they resonate with,so that they become emotionally invested in the book.I believe that the author needs to work more on this.

Damien

This will be the last in the Dom series that I will read.Disappointing to note that they are all the same with no real character growth,completely focused on BDSM,the authors second book was so well written I expected more of the same with this one but it never eventuated beyond the sexual sense.Technical writing skills are flawless,but the rest of it felt like regurgitated scenes from the first three books.Please remember that a review is only one person's opinion and stay true to who you are.

The Blood wolf

This book is not your stereotypical werewolf story and I love that, the author has a good grasp of emotive writing and his descriptive writing is also very good.There are some grammatical and spelling errors, with some of the words not fitting how the author was trying to use them but these are all small things.I would recommend a little less "talking to the reader" as this can sometimes appear juvenile, and it is something that annoys me when I read, as I like to get lost in the story. 42 chapters is a very long book,which will also put some people off reading,maybe think about turning it into a series?There are certainly enough developed characters to have a few books.Overall though it is a great story and I really think you have what it takes to succeed in this profession.

Brenden

I am really impressed by how much the author has grown in terms of his plot line and emotive writing skills, this book is vastly different from the first,and the BDSM was more realistic,although could still use some more research,especially on the body's capacity for how far something can be shoved before causing damage, as always the technical writing was flawless, just needs to work on other people's point of view within the story, well done.

Andrew

The authors technical writing skills are excellent,, I couldn't fault them,the writing style itself was very raw and graphic; not to everyone's tastes, however the warnings were clear in the blurb, so I was prepared. I found the plot to be quite choppy,and in need of filling out with other people's point of views,,and aside from BDSM there wasn't much else happening,which got boring.The transition from lust to love didn't flow very well,but that could be because of the male only pov. Perhaps a reclassification in genre from erotica to horror/erotica might be better in keeping with what the story was about,as the main characters Dom persona was abusive and torturous which isn't consistent with true BDSM, especially with comments like, 'shoulder deep' in someones rectum,that would kill someone in real time.Overall the author has put a lot of thought into their work,but with a little more research,the book could have been great.

The Alpha's breeder

This was a very different take on the usual werewolf novel and I thoroughly enjoyed it, I especially enjoyed the fact that the main characters didn't get split up through petty arguing or someone cheating on the other,and the plot had a lot of depth,it wasn't just an 'easy' read. I loved bringing the whole scientific aspect to it, and found that I stayed interested from beginning to end.The only criticism I have is that there were some typos and grammatical errors,nothing that can't be fixed with re editing.I am definitely looking forward to reading more of your work.

salacious

I found it quite hard to follow the flow of this book,and the time frame was all over the place,which was very confusing.Unfortunately,the practicalities of having so many guys in one night without a shower scene kinda grossed me out.And there doesn't seem to be a proper ending,too many loose ends,which is frustrating.The erotic descriptions are some of the better ones for this genre, but again,the typos and missed words kept distracting me,so perhaps another proofread would be beneficial.Please keep writing,and remember that a review is only one persons opinion and it looks like there were many others who thoroughly enjoyed what you have written.

The she-alpha's mate

It's refreshing to see a werewolf story where the Alpha is a female who takes charge, the genre definitely needs more of that, the typos and missed words were a bit of a turn off,but that's easily fixed with re-editing, I'm looking forward to seeing how the author progresses her story.

Eyes wide open

Okay, sometimes it is possible to over describe things,or use words that are not quite in the right context,and instead of enhancing the story,it detracts from it. I have read all of the comments throughout the five chapters from other writers/readers and kept an open mind, but I have to be honest and say that sometimes a simple description is more powerful than the most convoluted one. I would go back and take note of how many times you use the same words, in example 'recluse' and see if you can find a way to exchange it for something else to vary the story.Please keep writing as you have a great vocabulary and remember,a review is only one persons opinion,so stay true to your authenticity.

My brother's best friend

It's lovely to read a story that has the right balance of everything in it, and I really appreciate the effort it must have taken.I also found it admirable that you chose to tackle some major society issues within your book,while not compromising the romantic parts,really enjoyable read,thanks.

The rejection

I really enjoyed this book,the twists were great and it was well written.Thanks

The blood moon luna

I found the book to be a good read,and finished it in a day.
There were quite a few errors that a second editing would fix,and although it was alluded that Arthur was suspicious,the fact that this never went anywhere though was anti climactic.Thank you for taking the time to write 😀

Innocence

Love the plot,hate the cliffhanger,hopefully there is an update soon 🤣

The easy score

It was a good plot,and I liked the progression of feelings throughout,but the ending was a bit rushed and the whole Conner ending didn't flow very well,graphic sex scenes,much better than what I write, good story overall.

Knox's girl

Absolutely loved this book,well done.

The gemlish girl

I really like where you are going with this, it's different and that kept me interested when things didn't flow so smoothly,huge potential,looking forward to the second book :)