Andrew
The authors technical writing skills are excellent,, I couldn't fault them,the writing style itself was very raw and graphic; not to everyone's tastes, however the warnings were clear in the blurb, so I was prepared. I found the plot to be quite choppy,and in need of filling out with other people's point of views,,and aside from BDSM there wasn't much else happening,which got boring.The transition from lust to love didn't flow very well,but that could be because of the male only pov. Perhaps a reclassification in genre from erotica to horror/erotica might be better in keeping with what the story was about,as the main characters Dom persona was abusive and torturous which isn't consistent with true BDSM, especially with comments like, 'shoulder deep' in someones rectum,that would kill someone in real time.Overall the author has put a lot of thought into their work,but with a little more research,the book could have been great.
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