Venom01

New Zealand

Im a shy writer so please be kind, I give honest feedback, and don't bag or sabotage other writers.

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Quin and the crystal adventures

I have eight children and thought what better way to review a children's book,than to read it to them and see what they thought. The children in the same age group that the author is targeting said that they enjoyed the figurative interpretations throughout the story and the plot line was solid but they got bored with the micro explanations in the descriptive context. I enjoyed the great technical writing skills that the writer employed, it was lovely to come across something that had been carefully proof read, thanks.

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Dueling Shadows

Sometimes you need to take yourself out of the emotional situation and read your own words objectively.I think this book had potential, but some of the descriptions over explained the same emotion or didn't deliver on where the journey alluded it was going. Make sure if you use a description, then it is factual otherwise it detracts from the story you are trying to tell. Keep improving and don't ever stop writing because a review is only one persons opinion,good luck.

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Damien

This will be the last in the Dom series that I will read.Disappointing to note that they are all the same with no real character growth,completely focused on BDSM,the authors second book was so well written I expected more of the same with this one but it never eventuated beyond the sexual sense.Technical writing skills are flawless,but the rest of it felt like regurgitated scenes from the first three books.Please remember that a review is only one person's opinion and stay true to who you are.

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The Blood wolf

This book is not your stereotypical werewolf story and I love that, the author has a good grasp of emotive writing and his descriptive writing is also very good.There are some grammatical and spelling errors, with some of the words not fitting how the author was trying to use them but these are all small things.I would recommend a little less "talking to the reader" as this can sometimes appear juvenile, and it is something that annoys me when I read, as I like to get lost in the story. 42 chapters is a very long book,which will also put some people off reading,maybe think about turning it into a series?There are certainly enough developed characters to have a few books.Overall though it is a great story and I really think you have what it takes to succeed in this profession.

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Brenden

I am really impressed by how much the author has grown in terms of his plot line and emotive writing skills, this book is vastly different from the first,and the BDSM was more realistic,although could still use some more research,especially on the body's capacity for how far something can be shoved before causing damage, as always the technical writing was flawless, just needs to work on other people's point of view within the story, well done.

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Andrew

The authors technical writing skills are excellent,, I couldn't fault them,the writing style itself was very raw and graphic; not to everyone's tastes, however the warnings were clear in the blurb, so I was prepared. I found the plot to be quite choppy,and in need of filling out with other people's point of views,,and aside from BDSM there wasn't much else happening,which got boring.The transition from lust to love didn't flow very well,but that could be because of the male only pov. Perhaps a reclassification in genre from erotica to horror/erotica might be better in keeping with what the story was about,as the main characters Dom persona was abusive and torturous which isn't consistent with true BDSM, especially with comments like, 'shoulder deep' in someones rectum,that would kill someone in real time.Overall the author has put a lot of thought into their work,but with a little more research,the book could have been great.

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The Alpha's breeder

This was a very different take on the usual werewolf novel and I thoroughly enjoyed it, I especially enjoyed the fact that the main characters didn't get split up through petty arguing or someone cheating on the other,and the plot had a lot of depth,it wasn't just an 'easy' read. I loved bringing the whole scientific aspect to it, and found that I stayed interested from beginning to end.The only criticism I have is that there were some typos and grammatical errors,nothing that can't be fixed with re editing.I am definitely looking forward to reading more of your work.

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salacious

I found it quite hard to follow the flow of this book,and the time frame was all over the place,which was very confusing.Unfortunately,the practicalities of having so many guys in one night without a shower scene kinda grossed me out.And there doesn't seem to be a proper ending,too many loose ends,which is frustrating.The erotic descriptions are some of the better ones for this genre, but again,the typos and missed words kept distracting me,so perhaps another proofread would be beneficial.Please keep writing,and remember that a review is only one persons opinion and it looks like there were many others who thoroughly enjoyed what you have written.

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Whispers of the wolf

I am really enjoying the unique take on a widely explored genre, the mating for chosen mates was excellent to read and very satisfying, I think the plot line is one of the best I have read in awhile and it's great to see someone challenging gender specific roles, keep up the great work.

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The she-alpha's mate

It's refreshing to see a werewolf story where the Alpha is a female who takes charge, the genre definitely needs more of that, the typos and missed words were a bit of a turn off,but that's easily fixed with re-editing, I'm looking forward to seeing how the author progresses her story.

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Sexy janitor

I read the first book,sexy roommate and felt that the ending was very rushed compared to the rest of the book,this time with sexy janitor, more thought has been given to the development of characters and the evolving of the story line which I am enjoying.I especially enjoy the carry over characters from the first book and watching how they interact with amnesia Dean, this book is interesting with enough twists and turns to stop the predictability of typical romance novels.Well done.

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Eyes wide open

Okay, sometimes it is possible to over describe things,or use words that are not quite in the right context,and instead of enhancing the story,it detracts from it. I have read all of the comments throughout the five chapters from other writers/readers and kept an open mind, but I have to be honest and say that sometimes a simple description is more powerful than the most convoluted one. I would go back and take note of how many times you use the same words, in example 'recluse' and see if you can find a way to exchange it for something else to vary the story.Please keep writing as you have a great vocabulary and remember,a review is only one persons opinion,so stay true to your authenticity.

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Blood vow

It is rare to find a book on here that has such a precise gift of describing details, I found this ongoing book to be skilfully written, and the transition between points of view was fairly smooth.Well done for having a same sex mating, they can sometimes be hard to write, but you've done really well and aside from a few very minor grammatical errors it was excellently written,well done.

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My brother's best friend

It's lovely to read a story that has the right balance of everything in it, and I really appreciate the effort it must have taken.I also found it admirable that you chose to tackle some major society issues within your book,while not compromising the romantic parts,really enjoyable read,thanks.

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My stepbrother is a werebear

I love this series but this was my least favourite story,it seemed a bit choppy in places but then again this authors worst writing is other peoples best writing,KL lord is an excellent writer.

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Craving Ali

I really enjoyed this book,not usually something I would read tbh but I was pleasantly surprised.

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The rejection

I really enjoyed this book,the twists were great and it was well written.Thanks

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The blood moon luna

I found the book to be a good read,and finished it in a day.
There were quite a few errors that a second editing would fix,and although it was alluded that Arthur was suspicious,the fact that this never went anywhere though was anti climactic.Thank you for taking the time to write 😀

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Innocence

Love the plot,hate the cliffhanger,hopefully there is an update soon 🤣

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The easy score

It was a good plot,and I liked the progression of feelings throughout,but the ending was a bit rushed and the whole Conner ending didn't flow very well,graphic sex scenes,much better than what I write, good story overall.

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Knox's girl

Absolutely loved this book,well done.

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The gemlish girl

I really like where you are going with this, it's different and that kept me interested when things didn't flow so smoothly,huge potential,looking forward to the second book :)

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Fever claim

I love your work and wait with bated breath for each update!!

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