Back to Story
What is your opinion?
A promising start
"The first few chapters do a great job of starting to build and fill out this quite strange and mysterious world. The balance between plot and world building is also really good, with the story beginning to take some interesting turns that I am sure will begin to unfold in some intriguing ways. Overall a good start with lots of potential."
Carine
"Interresting story with multiple faces. Would like to read further as the story unfolds. What would they encounter on the surface?"
