Inkitt
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What is your opinion?

It is good

"It is good"

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Tim on holiday

"Pretty good "

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Great overall

"So the sex scenes were very vivid but the story was lacking. I just couldn't get connected with the characters. And then there were the whole dialog tags that were wrong. Plus the misspells there and here in the chapters. Either way, though I would give it a second read."

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Final Call.

"Nice Love Story. Writer took to long to get to the heart of the real story."

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